Scourge

 
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Fear the spawn of the Chained Sun, those angelic abominations. Once, they guided and protected us. Today they seek the radiant annihilation of us all.
  Prior to the Scorching of Mercury the scourge were known as angels. They guided humanity on their way among the stars, and served as protectors against the horrors beyond Sol. Over the centuries they retreated. Slowly they withdrew back to Sol, for so long that people started to doubt they had ever existed. Until they attacked.   The scourge take many forms: some Scourge appear humanoid, others are chimeric. All scourge are capable of flight, but only some have wings. All forms seem to have an inordinate amount of eyes. Beyond their fearsome appearance, and brutality, the very presence of the scourge is in and of itself dangerous. Each scourge are highly radioactive and radiant. Their fury ignites and melts materials around them.

From Angels to Anathema

Angels feature prominently in the myths and legends of the system. They were the near-divine messengers of Sol, intermediaries between the sun and the planets. It is said that every Keystone had at least two angels by her side, one to guide her and one to guard her.   Over the course of history sightings became less common. They left the side of the Keystones. The angels withdrew from the worlds. Some scholars began to argue that they never had existed at all, that they were metaphorical or perhaps exaggerations of saint-like figures. These scholars were proven brutally wrong in 220010.   When the angels returned, they returned as a devastating force. Mercury was laid to waste by the angelic host, now dubbed the Scourge. The beings that had once defended the System had turned upon it. Only for a few years was there any relief for Mercury, when its own Keystone sacrificed herself to chain the sun and restrain its violence.   The crusade continues to this day. So far the attacks have been contained to Mercury by the sustained collaboration of the Interplanetary Solar Defence Council. The Solar Pulses have been extinguished by the Orbital Missiles of Caduceus and the forces at Penumbra.

by Annie Stein


See Also

☉︎ Chained Sun
History Scorching of Mercury
Species Scourge

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Feature Friday 44-2024

The distance is rapidly closing, and if she squints she feels like she might actually see fiery shapes at the edge of her perception. Murderous little stars. The computer beeps at her, and the number of dots goes down to four.   A whoop comes over her headset. “Splash three! Noli timere, bitches!”
  I have always wondered what it must've been like for the Egyptians to be on the recieving end of the tenth plague. Check out the prologue written by Skye for a sneak peek at the scourge in action.


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Jul 29, 2022 16:13

I looooooove the sound of these guys. They sound scary as heck, and the exact kind of angel that I like to see in my fiction. :D


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Jul 29, 2022 20:01 by Annie Stein

Thank you! I've so much planned for the scourge! I cannot wait.

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Jul 29, 2022 18:36 by Amélie I. S. Debruyne

Ooooh! This is very mysterious! What happened to sol? Was it corrupted by the abominations beyond the solar system? Or did it changed its mind and decided to just get rid of all the other inhabitants of the planets? XD of course, I presume it's all spoilers for now :p   and without the protection of sol, now everyone is even on more dangers for all the other abominations.. Is it because of recent technological progress that they are able to fight both zol and the abominations at the same time when before they needed sol's help against just the abominations, or is it just a question of time before they're overwhelmed?   Great article, I love those ex angels and sol all just betraying everyone without explanations and the resulting mystery!

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Jul 29, 2022 19:52 by Annie Stein

Thank you! Having a surplus of eyes in common does make you question things, doesn't it?

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Jul 29, 2022 20:40 by Aster Blackwell

It's like an autoimmune disorder, like the solar system's "immune system" for some reason turned against it. Fascinating! It makes me wonder what triggered the switch, and.. could it be possible to switch it back? :O

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Jul 30, 2022 08:35 by Annie Stein

Thank you! That's a really cool way to put it!

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Aug 5, 2022 04:08 by Stormbril

This is absolutely fantastic. Love the flowy/poetic way of describing the scourge -- the bit about "Every Keystone had at least two angels by her side, one to guide her and one to guard her" stood out in particular to me. I love how terrifying they are, and I can't wait to see more about them!

Aug 5, 2022 09:13 by Annie Stein

Thanks! I hope to add more soon, I really want to write about the different kinds (and illustrate them!) but we'll see what I get around to. So much to do, so much to do!

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Aug 7, 2022 12:33

Fascinated by the ancient history it holds behind it. The sense it's older than humanity and yet few are able to harness its strength and prowess to guide and guard the Keystones. The corrupted twist the Scourge falls into really makes it terrifying as the radiant righteousness of something so biblical now falls on the victims of Mercury.   Short and to the point, It gives all the information needed to understand their potential   Very impressed!

Aug 7, 2022 19:23 by Annie Stein

Thank you so much! I'm glad it is coming across as intended!

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Aug 27, 2022 15:56 by Fall

I really enjoyed your submission to this promt! I mean space angels? c'mon, who doesn't love space angels!? I loved it so much that i've included it in my Summer Camp '22 Reading Challenge article:

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Aug 28, 2022 21:42 by Annie Stein

Oh gosh! Thank you! I'm very flattered you liked it enough to share ^^

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Jan 2, 2023 05:04 by Marjorie Ariel

Ooh! I love the concept of angels being beings from the sun. Also, I know it's totally different, but since you have beings from the sun, have you ever heard of Gustofer Yellowgold?

Jan 2, 2023 09:11 by Annie Stein

Thank you! It was one of the fun things I could do when I decided not to worry too much about what was plausible.   Also, no, I'm not familiar with them.

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Jan 2, 2023 17:18 by Marjorie Ariel

Sometimes the best thing you can do in writing is stop worrying about "plausibility."   Gustofer Yellowgold is the creation of Morgan Taylor. He's a "sunling," which are creatures that live on the sun. His stories/music are directed at kids, and completely different from yours, but whenever I see stories about beings from the sun, I think of him.

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Jul 1, 2023 09:02 by Annie Stein

Our last conversation about the scourge was a big help in clarifying what I wanted to emphasize! Thank you!

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Jul 1, 2023 22:55 by Gabrielle Decker

Wow, I had no idea! I'm here for it, thank you!

Jun 29, 2023 23:27 by Keon Croucher

This is a beautiful and poetic piece, and terrifying. I can only imagine the sheer....destructive force that was laid upon Mercury by an actual army of such beings as described. It would have been almost....beautiful, if not the for terror associated with well war. It is also a piece that offers a lot of curious space within it for the inquisitive mind to get lost in questions of motive, the most...elusive kind in the studies of history. Why? Why the sudden change of allegiance. Why the withdrawal back to Sol? Why the sudden wave of aggression, with seemingly no explanation.   They are the most interesting questions to leave open, because the questions that start with 'Why' are so very seldom ever something of a simple answer. So I can't help but imagine there is a great deal of information and context for the events that are lost, or at least as of yet, undiscovered. Well done!

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Jul 2, 2023 14:33 by Annie Stein

Thank you. I'm so thrilled to hear those questions, that's exactly what I hoped people would be left wondering. There is much more I hope to elaborate on, I can promise that once I get started on the comic you won't have to wait long to see them up close and learn more.

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Jul 1, 2023 13:45 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Absolutely terrifying. D: Poor Mercury. It's so scary that they were protectors who turned.

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Jul 2, 2023 14:35 by Annie Stein

Yeah, the scourge are terrifying. I feel like it stings that there's a history and a betrayal like that.

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Jul 6, 2023 23:38 by Marjorie Ariel

There are a lot of stories out there that speak to angels actually being quite frightening. I love the spin you took on that. Great picture!

Jul 7, 2023 06:35 by Annie Stein

Yeah, that was definitely a big influence, I've often wondered what it must've been like to have been on the other side of a wrathful angel.

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