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Dawn Spirit

Su-mehr Qiamp    Metaphysics      Dawn Spirit
I end today a defeated woman. I knew it would be tight, but I ran the numbers. No matter what I did, how I rearranged things, I couldn't get enough to pay back the loans.   It was bad luck, mostly. The bad floods damaging the shop, the bad flu keeping me out of work, the bad mice eating my supplies. But it doesn't matter. Payment is due either way, and I can't pay. I'm at a loss. The merchant's guild will know that I'm a failure. What will I do if they take my shop?
— A final journal page

Emotion Made Manifest

There are times in a person's life when the future becomes something feared and dreaded. Issues of health, work, money, relationships, and more pile up and become insurmountable. Some people coping with these struggles will fall asleep one night and enter a comatose state where their soul detaches from their body to act on their suffering. They become a dawn spirit, a living ghost.   Like their dusk spirit counterparts, dawn spirits retain all the memories of their living self, and appear as a semi-transparent version of them. That's where the similarities end, however. Dawns are the amplified emotions of their living host. They can only be seen by seers, and not only can be reasoned with, but must be: only if a dawn willingly returns to their body will their host wake up.   If the host survives, they retain no memories of their spiritual counterpart, but the near-death experience leaves them forever changed.  

Behavior

A dawn is classified as peaceful, tormented, or vengeful based on their emotional state, which can change wildly based on what's happening around or to them. A peaceful dawn can turn vengeful with a single unfortunate reminder. Anyone they feel has wronged them or can be blamed for their situation is a possible target, regardless of the soundness of the dawn's reasoning.   While dawns can't physically interact with living beings, the way they affect their surroundings can cause significant harm. Deaths from hauntings are thankfully rare, but injuries and property damage are unavoidable. Courts have decided that the living host cannot be held legally responsible for their dawn's actions, leaving groups like the Advocacy for Better Living scrambling to help those affected.  
Wynelle came by today. Asked what I was building. She truly doesn't know she destroyed half the tavern. I wanted to scream, but I asked her to leave instead. I hated seeing her sad about it, and I hate that I hated it. I want to hate her for what she did.
— A struggling barkeep confides in a friend
 

Treatment

Even with treatment like suspension, the living host of a dawn will die within a week spent comatose, and their dawn will disappear. To save them, seers track down the dawn to talk through their fears and find a way to convince them to willingly return to their body. They document what transpires to share with the host when they awaken. At that point, it's up to the host to decide and act on their new path forward.   Some dawns are comparatively easy to work with and can be returned to their bodies with minimal risk. Others are more stubborn, or even refuse treatment entirely. At times, there is no solution, such as when someone's ailments have reached the limit of modern medicine. Returning to their body means returning to a life of suffering, being in pain or confined to a bed. Dying as a dawn is their way to die on their own terms, experiencing a last bit of freedom.

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Also Known As
Dawns
Living Ghosts
Native To
Su-mehr Qiamp

Types of Spirit

Peaceful
Passively observes the world or causes minor mischief. Easiest to talk to, hardest to save.
Tormented
In a panicked or aggrieved state. May cause minor disturbances around them, possibly unintentionally.
Vengeful
Severely distressed or enraged. Can cause significant damage, sometimes leading to more deaths.

Trivia

In Qiampian culture, dawn is a time for planning and preparing for the day.   There's debate over whether a person becomes a dawn spirit, or if the dawn spirit is an entirely separate entity.   No record shows a single person becoming a dawn spirit twice.

Aftermath

Nobody becomes a dawn spirit and returns unchanged. Even without the memories, everyone reports a profound transformation in how they see the world. Most feel more determined and motivated, yet also detached. Things that once felt important no longer do, from stressful problems to their favorite meals.   They also report difficulty tracking the passage of time. Hours may pass in the blink of an eye while minutes tick by like whole days. It can cause problems with work and relationships when they're regularly late, unreasonably early, or miss dates completely. Severity can vary, and most problems are resolved by having a friend or loved one help keep them on track.   Many post-dawn individuals change major aspects of their lives afterward, from new professions to leaving everything behind to travel. Sometimes the changes are enough that friends and family question if they truly got their loved one back, or if it's something else piloting their body.
I don't know why I was so upset. There are ways to deal with missed payments. Even if I lost the shop, a market stall works just fine, doesn't it? I hated it before, but I don't remember why.   Everything comes back to money, but I don't see the point anymore. It's stressful to worry about. I suppose that's what a merchant does. Perhaps I don't want to be a merchant at all anymore.   If I wasn't a merchant? I suppose I could be anything. Anything at all.
— A woman, post-dawn, speaks with a life advisor
 

Read More

- Advocacy for Better Living -   The Advocacy is a volunteer organization whose work can both prevent dawns and help people after a dawning occurs.
- Felhalanni - Celebrating Time's Passage -   Dawns are often the result of societal problems. These problems are slow to fix, but felhalanni is an example of when it goes right.
- Suspension -   Physicians tending to the comatose employ a variety of tools and methods to keep them alive just a bit longer.

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Answering: "A species that undergoes a metamorphosis"
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All work is copyright Rin Garnett 2025, all rights reserved. Background image by Dawn Hudson with edits by Rin Garnett. This is a short-term project for Summer Camp 2025. If you're interested in more of my work, check out wow that's a lot of stars.


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    Councilor of the Inner Sanctum Serukis
    Aug 4, 2025 12:33 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

    Terrifying that this could happen to anyone really. I'm glad that some can be saved.

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    Grandmaster Those2Nerds
    Aug 9, 2025 14:46 by Rin Garnett

    Just what anyone needs when stressed, also stressing about maybe dying a little bit!

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    Councilor of the Inner Sanctum Mochimanoban
    Aug 22, 2025 22:09 by Mochi

    I really love this article! I love how unique the concept is. We're all too familiar with stress, and how damaging it can be. Stress in the real world is bad enough, knowing it could turn you or anyone into a spirit is horrifying. But if it means someone in excruciating pain can have a peaceful end, maybe it's a good thing.   Thank you for submitting an article to my sponsored prompt!

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    Aug 27, 2025 20:57 by Rin Garnett

    It certainly forces a change upon the situation. Sometimes even a good one!

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