So, this is my first reading challenge I am part of and I must admit that I am a little lost here. I am not used to writing articles that are based on thoughts and introspection - especially as someone who prefers to keep to my own solitude when it comes to reflection.
As for SummerCamp, I had a blast last month. I thoroughly enjoyed the themes and I do feel I’ve managed to grow my writing skills to a point at which I am happy. This does not mean I wont still chase improvement, but I am finally comfortable with properly finishing an article without swearing that I’ll return sometime later to change it. Which means I’ll be doing a lot of that now. Revisioning and finalizing old articles.
To this end I thought, what better way to engage my new rhythm but to read through others articles on this SC and see what I can learn from them. Be it adapting on the phasing to improve my flow, melding a style which would mesh perfectly with what I am already doing, or outright rethinking my entire way of doing things.
The Birth of the Daeva Empire by Sabrina K. Mercury
This article is a stark reminder for me that not every conflict has to be a ten page epic, with every commander, unit and tactic mentioned - and an ultra-realistic mil-sim wiki-page at the bottom of it. As someone who loves the Warhammer universe, history and strategy games with grit and realism behind it - I still aim to make these massive articles for my bloodiest and most widespread conflicts.
However, for military campaigns, localized warzones and conflicts between smaller organizations, this punchy and direct attitude towards writing would be perfect. The Birth of the Daeva Empire has no unnecessary fluff, goes right to the point and is condensed in a way that it instantly hooked me. I loved reading through it and even as a shorter article, it managed to smoothly lay out all its points in a way that it was easy to grasp what it was about and also to paint a vivid image on how the conclusion of its cold war would lead to both creation, and quite likely a few problems with those who would lose from peace.
The Inkwood by Nicemustang
A magically altered forest that does not seem to be that nightmarish or absurdly dangerous at all, but rather ripe with opportunities. This article tells me a lot on how magic could alter the world dramatically and also bring countless new opportunities to the table, either through new raw materials, strategic value and even potential threats if allowed to spread without being kept in check.
This got me thinking, what if in my own setting, the regions touched by the corruption of the abyss are not purely destructive forces, but some of their realms may be steeped in eldritch beauty or grow some specific organic material which serves as an incredibly powerful alchemical reagent. The possibilities are endless and this article really opened up my eyes for this idea.
Imperium Dust by D3vilmade
This article goes into the details of a sacred dust which stands as not only a material with hidden usages, but as a cultural staple within it's Empire. I really enjoy speculating what this dust could be used for - such as how it's psychoactive properties could likely warp the populace's minds and make them more compliant towards their rulers?
I also loved how there was a lot of different bullet points which made the article easy to read and grasp for me. I do not use bullet points nearly enough, which this article opened my eyes for. I really should use them more especially for my denser articles to break them up to be more readable.
Storm Hammer by netrom09
This article describes the tactics used by an aerial command ship - which hits close to home with my own aerial armada ideas I have. What I especially loved about this article was also how it breaks up strengths (or adaptations) and weaknesses into bulletpoints which are easy to read. For the future, I think I should take a note from this to add at least a side-bar with weaknesses/strengths for my own military unit articles.
Thaumatologist by hiero79
Here is an article which I find to be underrated. The Thaumatologist is someone who dabbles in what I'd call a near academic pursuit of esoteric magic. Concepts from old tales and legends are manifested from incantations derived from old folklore - creating an incredibly realistic outlook on magic. It is not something which is inherited by blood, nor something you can just be taught in a school. It is something you need to chase across the entire world to find clues of. To delve into ancient myths, explore forlorn civilizations, decipher extinct languages. All things which I find to be incredibly cool!
A lot of these ideas mirror my own, especially with the Occult Hunters - how they also often require uncovering ancient secrets to devise the means needed to hunt certain monsters. This teaches me to think even further out of the box on how I treat my own world's magic - by adding a very unorthodox component to the fantastical. Realism.
The Free City of Mageport by Crafty_Dm
A city which started to form after mages had enough of lawlessness and constant disruptions ruining their days - thus taking it upon themselves to establish order and justice. I'm fond of this article because it has both longer and well made segments that manages to describe both the history and culture of the city, while also mixing in punchier sections of what exists within its walls. This blend is not just perfect for TTRPG setting, but also for readability.
I've taken a note from this article to break up larger sections with smaller punchy ones as it improves the rhythm and makes it easier to immerse oneself in the worldbuilding.
Order's Bull of the Wise Flame by Blue Fairy 74
An incredibly cool article about a document signed by a matriarchy to ensure their rule remains firm and that they preserve their fire magical heritage, which seems to be inbaked as a central pillar of their culture and belief. I love how this article goes into such depth of not just the bulla - but also gives insights into how the Layid faith's doctrines affect society at large, how the people react to it, that their magic is tied to technology and even how it is used to legitimize their matriarchal rule, through a rite which only females are able to undertake.
I've learned a lot from this article, that even a document might paint ten thousand more words through the sheer mental immagery brought to life. Through smoothly baking in the overarching culture(s) into it a wide web that touches on several topics, without overexplaining anything. Which is how this article alone has made me facinated in the Layid society.
Walking Stick by Wordigirl
This article by Wordigirl describes walking sticks and what they are used for. Now, usually when I think about a stick - I see a stick. What she has done here however, is practically describe how this humble stick becomes a survivors favorite tool. She also manages to showcase here how something so simple can play a massive role in the world, and with great flow of her words. Sometimes you do not need to re-invent the wheel to make something awesome, just find great ways to further apply them!
Wicker Slings by WreckerDwarf
When I checked this article out, I expected witchery from the wicker and pelting some kind of runic stones with the slings - what I got was far more clever. A wholesome item used in the everyday lives of WreckerDwarf's orcen. Now, it was actually his response to my comment, about it being bait and switch, which really got to me and elevated this into my top 10 favourites. I love the trickster archetype, so when someone manages to pull off something like that on me? I got to respect it.
This has also taught me something epic - that the good ole' subverting expectations trick can be outright badass (or in this case, very clever and wholesome) if done right.
Ordo Venatorum de Magicis Malignis by Clockwocket
Well, where do I even start here. As a massive enjoyer of Van Helsing, alternative history, folklore and faith - this hits about every single sweet spot for me. An article about an order meant to teach about magic and also safeguard the world against it, but hunting those whom would use it for ill intents? I. Love. It. I find everything about this article fantastic and it mirrors a lot of what I do in my own world - except with the alternative history, which honestly just makes me adore this even more.
As for what I can take from this article to improve my own? Well, for one how the layout is also similar to how I write my own articles, except this one is just plain better in most areas.
Thank you very much for including my article about the vicious, ravenous, brutal and bloodthirsty orcen in your summer camp reading list!
Why, certainly! xD