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Dead Daughter's Dance

CW: Death, descriptions of murder
Long ago, the ballroom of the moonlit mansion was alive with the echos of conversation, the tapping of shoes as men and women danced in perfect sync, and the gentle hum of music. Lord Paricida fluttered along the dance floor, steps light as a feather. His daughter in hand, they twirled, silver cloaks intertwining.
  The two flew around the ballroom, their wings carrying them to the ceiling. Guests danced with one another, leaving the Lord and his daughter a moment's peace, with no eyes on them.
  With a smile, the Lord let his daughter go. Her wings could not save her as she fell to the floor. The Lord dragged her bloodied body behind velvet curtains. The party continued as normal, as though nothing happened.
  The spirits saw. And they cursed him.
  Centuries later, wind whistles through cracked windows. A ghostly voice can be heard from the ballroom. Lord Paricida continues to dance on the cracked floor. Every step he takes kills him. The spirits have hollowed him. Any life he once had is long gone, but he must continue to dance. Every footstep snaps his bones like dry grass.
  Only one thing can save him. True remorse.

The story of the Dead Daughter's Dance is one every citizen of Erene, a country on Auvarha, is familiar with. Countless people claim to confirm this story, yet most refuse to believe it to be real.

Lord Paricida is a major mythological figure frequently mentioned in mythology of the country, particularly around the Sunspot Isles. The Moonlit Mansion is one of the most iconic landmarks in the archipelago, yet it is strictly forbidden to enter on account of the dangerous magical happenings.

Variations

The tale has been twisted over the years, but the core story always features a lord mercilessly killing his daughter, then being cursed by spirits to dance for eternity.

Some stories say the lord was a vampire, driven mad after finding out his daughter wasn't actually his. In this iteration, the lord stabs her daughter with a golden dagger.

Many variations of the Dead Daughter's Dance give different endings to the story. Some say the spirits actually killed the man, and he was revived as a husk. Other variations state the lord eventually felt some remorse for his actions, and was freed from the curse. Though, this did not heal him, and he ended up dying anyways.

Date of First Recording
Around 500 years ago
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Author's Notes

This article is also an entry to NovelEmber 2025! I've put off writing anything for NovelEmber for literally the entire month, so I've got one last day to get it all done!


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Nov 30, 2025 16:48 by Lou

The imagery in this is incredible! And such a unique concept omg :0

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    Nov 30, 2025 16:51 by Mochi

    aaa thank you so much! That means a lot <3

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    Nov 30, 2025 21:19

    Oo unsettling, love me some spooky ghost myths. Poor daughter.

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    Dec 2, 2025 08:57 by Mochi

    Thank you so much! <3

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    Nov 30, 2025 21:46 by Imagica

    Beautifully written and AMAZING art!! I am in love with this image <3

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    Aaaaa thank you Imagica! That means a lot to me <33

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    Dec 1, 2025 04:18 by Barron

    As Ademal and I were saying, you are a master of the craft. This content is chilling, the art is amazing. Everything comes together like chefs kiss. I can't wait to see if you come back and expand this one.



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    Dec 2, 2025 09:03 by Mochi

    Barronnnn you are too sweet, thank you <3 That means so much to me! I definitely want to flesh out this article a bit more :D

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    Dec 1, 2025 18:42 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

    You really shouldn't worry about your prose. I love your word choice and the vibes your storytelling gives off. Great myth.

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    Dec 2, 2025 09:26 by Mochi

    Thank you Emy! That's really reassuring, thank you <3

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    Dec 4, 2025 13:04

    Woaaaah, that was dark. Wasn't expecting something like that. Even with the warning I wasn't prepared for something like that.

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    Dec 4, 2025 14:13 by Mochi

    hehehe, Dark Mochi comes out very rarely xD

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    Dec 6, 2025 05:29 by Ephraïm Boateng

    The drawing and the prose are both beautiful!

    Dec 12, 2025 13:28 by Mochi

    Thank you so much! <3

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    Dec 6, 2025 16:08 by Aster Blackwell

    The art of the dancer is so beautiful!

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    Thank youuu! <3

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