Whoever this Ihantal was or is, he sure left us a mighty gift.— Milawsa Ili Eišara, Heir to Uari's Razirite
Ihantal's Spear is a mysterious colossal tower located on the slopes of
Ihantal's Spine, a mountain range that forms the northern boundry of the
Central Plain. According to local legends, the tower was a gift to the nomadic
Celadrisian people by the spirits of the mountains, a token of appriciation and trust that must forever be held in high regard. Unwilling to let the weak and worthless claim the structure, the wise and mysterious spirits devised a test to ensure that only a strong leader—one capable of uniting the people and leading them to a path of glory and greatness—could enter the tower.
Discovery
The Spear was discovered in the early winter of 1495
AA by a group of Celadrisian scouts. According to their tales, the large tower had remained hidden behind the wall of smoke and poison that their elders had warned them about in their ancient tales. Curious, one of them attempted to ride through the smoke, but his horse had stepped into a hole, and both of them fell into an endless abyss. The other scout reported the discovery to his leader,
Razirit Milawsa Ba Uari.
Appearance
The bottom part of the structure is a smooth uncorroded zinc-plated steel surface, and the rest of it looks like a slate stalagmite that has erupted itself out of the mountain slope. The spire has elaborate carvings chiselled into its surface and several dozen round holes that allow the inhabitants to receive sunlight. The entrance to the tower is kept guarded by a half a meter thick rusty iron door.
Mysterious Purpose
The locals believe that Ihantal, the great spirit of the mountains themselves, lifted the earth and hollowed the stone to create the massive spiral that now towers over the vast plains. According to such tales, the tower was meant to serve as the seat of power for a new and mighty Celdrisian empire.
When Razirit Milawsa entered the tower, she found herself surrounded by weapons, armor, and hundreds of strange contraptions made of steel, iron, and other metals. The discovery of the equipment assured the Celadrisians that great Ihantal wanted them to rule over their neighbours and that the towers sole purpose was to aid in that ambitious endeavour.
Foreign Interpretation
Scholars from the
Kingdom of Sarala and the
Federal Geniocracy of Ithelmark believe that the
Patic Kingdom had originally constructed the tower, but the scholars haven't been able to agree on an explanation as to how the structure had remained hidden for thousands of years.
Floors
The ground floor of the tower is a giant area that takes up the vast majority of the whole tower. The ceiling and many of the walls of this room are covered in metal pipes and strange machinery. The wall opposite of the massive entrance door has an elevator that can slowly lift up to fifty people to the second floor near the top of the tower.
The Mud Floor
Servant's of Razirit Milawsa and her elite warriors live on the lowest of the upper floors. Despite being called the Mud Floor, the conditions that its residents live in are far better than on the ground floor or in the camps around the Spear itself. The cafeteria where the upper floor residents eat in lies on the Mud Floor, and so does the central armoury, the kitchen, and the showers.
The Grass Floor
The Razirit's most loyal and fearsome soldiers get to live on the Grass Floor. There they have their communal lounge for rest and recreation, treasury and trophy room for all the loot they've plundered, a sparring room, and a place referred to as the steam room. The soldiers and officers sleep in separate rooms, but all of them use the same cafeteria and showers on the Mud Floor.
The Stone Floor
The woman who is in charge of everything, Razirit Milawsa Ba Uari, lives on the Stone Floor, the elevator's final destination. Although she is the only one who is allowed to live there, guards and servants still come up and tend to her desires. Her room is large and luxurious, walls covered in masterfully painted artworks and the floors decked out with priceless carpets. The Stone Floor has a lounge, but it's mostly empty since the Razirit prefers to use her room for rest and recreation.
The floor possesses a small gallery that leads to the library. The shelves there are mostly bare and dusty, but for some reason, the Razirit has forbidden entry to that room. Her floor also has a kitchen where the servants cook meals for her and her guest and a dining hall for the consumption of said meals. Near the kitchen is the locker room and beyond that, the showers.
The Toilet Pipe
At the centre of Ihantal's Spire is a strange straight lead pipe. It is around half a meter in diameter and goes through the entire tower, coming out of the tip of the Spear by a few meters. Where it comes from or what its purpose was has remained unknown, but the locals have cut off sections of it, and they've used this convenient pipe as their toilet.
Toilet Hierarchy
Because their toilet is just a straight pipe, residents in the process of using it might find their hats soiled by someone above them. The Celadrisians considered coming up with a solution at first, but in the end, they decided to keep the old pipe unmodified.
The toilet pipe is a clear indicator of the social status of the tower's residents. The servants have to look out for everyone, the soldiers look out for their leader, and the Razirit remains safe from embarrassments.
The pipe....oh godddddd! Nooooooo! Lol I enjoyed the read and man you really tookk your time on this one. The details are complete and very well done. The love and care as you crafted your tower show through beautifully. Very nice maps. How did you do them? I'm reallllly curious about one thing and that curiosity is part question and part critique. So why didn't they fix the plumbing. I love the metaphor your going for there but aof lol horrible way to live. Disease and ooooof the smell. Lol my main critique with it isn't that it wasnt modified but the composition of the pipes. Steel will rust given time as its exposed daily to...these conditions. Less so of water isnt used to wash down the pipes but then you risk clogging. It's by no means bad at all. You can keep it but sewer drainage was usually lead if I'm right. Just a thought cause to be honest it doesn't matter what its made of to those in lower levels XD
Thanks for the feedback. I wanted to write more about the pipe but I ran into the dreaded 1500 words. The pipe is rather mysterious to the locals and they don't even know where it leads, it just goes deep underground and all attempts to figure it out have failed. For all they know they could be dumping their excrament on some terrifying sleeping monster :P The maps were originally created with Adobe Illustrator, but then I realized I forgot to add doors so I had to go do some editing with Photoshop.
Maker of Maps
Lol its no issue at allll. It works beautifully. My only think was its composition which given word count I tottally get. Well you did very well with those maps and I really enjoyed it. sorry if I sounded rude. It tottally was notttt intentional. I went into work mind cause plumbing is part of my job. XD forgot what I was doing lol