May Be Better Challenge

Since I have been constantly editing a lot of my work these past few months, I figured I would show what I'm doing, so this challenge works perfectly to show what I truly wish for these articles to be. Let's take a look, and I have to say that I find this a win. P.S. Leave a like on the articles attached to this, too.   Publication Date 23rd December, 2021
Shinobi
Military Formation | May 28, 2025

Warriors that have mastered the art of stealth and subterfuge to wreak havoc on those they hunt, if they get paid for the right price that is.

This one needs a bit of revision and editing to get it right with the current state of the world, so it should be done.   Publication Date 28th March, 2020
Kingdom of Ardania
Organization | May 23, 2025

A once prosperous kingdom that ruled the entirety of the South Lands only to fall from turmoil with and beyond it borders.

It was a bit of a mess when it left last time, but a little revision and editing went a long way now.   Publication Date 5th April, 2020
Vatian Empire
Organization | Jul 20, 2025

One of the greatest empires that have ever existed in the world, but it now seems to be falling to its own destruction.

While I did do an edit for it a while back, I figured it needed more when I looked back at it with new images and editing, along with some lore revisions.   Publication Date 7th September, 2018
Alchemist
Profession | May 18, 2025

Practitioners of Alchemy that uses their knowledge to create solutions that transcend the limits of known science.

This was one of the earliest articles I hadn't touched in years, and everything had to be thrown out and added along the way, which turned out great.   Publication Date 6th August, 2020
Death's Turf
Organization | May 28, 2025

One of the only nations in the world ruled over by the undead that try to live any semblance a normal life as they can till they finally know peace.

It was a bare minimum back in the day, and I had to start from scratch with many new ideas, but after a couple of days, I became satisfied with the outcome.

Cover image: by Jester%

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May 30, 2025 18:13

May-be This Could Be Done Better
Generic article | Apr 26, 2025

Unofficial May Challenge: Time to rewrite your old articles.

May you forever find your way on the journey you set out on and make yourself greater.
The Sagas world cover
Jun 1, 2025 04:12 by Asmod

Hecking yesss