Paladins Pledge
The Tale of the Paladin’s Pledge
They said the Blitz dropped more than bombs. Sirens rose; streets emptied; and when the smoke crawled back into the alleys, something else came with it—things that walked without pulses, things stitched from kennel and cadaver, things that wore uniforms like masks. Engineers called them field tests. Priests called them blasphemies. Soldiers called them targets until their bullets slowed in the air, as if guilt itself had thickened London’s fog.
Across the fronts the stories multiplied. Plague zombies in the Polish mud. Artificial werewolves slamming into trench walls like battering rams with lungs. Soulless stormtroopers whose eyes were not eyes but lenses—cold, recording, unblinking. The Thule Society had been “disbanded” by memorandum; its pieces slithered instead into new offices with darker carpets. Runes met rivets; claws met calculus. The world had asked for heroes and received them, bright figures in armbands of every flag; but against factories that made nightmares by the hundred, even heroes began to look few.
Few—but not small.
In a battered crypt under a bomb-shorn church off Holborn, five people gathered with what little the city had not yet lost. An Army quartermaster pushed a wooden crate across the stone and set down a cavalry sabre with a broken tip—Pattern 1908, the kind a father might pass to a son with a story in the hinge. A chemist from Cambridge unrolled parchment copied out of older parchment, formulas scribbled upside-down in John Dee’s own crabbed hand. A blacksmith who had learned his forge at sea spat on his palms, looked at the sabre, and said nothing. A woman whose name does not appear in any ledger laid down a small leather bag of coins: sovereigns with faces that had once promised continuity. And the last of the five, a quiet man with a throat scar and a watch set to the minute of his brother’s death, placed a simple rosary on the workbench and said, “Oaths first.”
They did not say the war. They said our promise.
Gold melted with the hiss of a struck match. Silver from altar plate and a lady’s locket joined it, mingling into electrum—pale as moonlight, warm as candlefire. The smith recast the blade straight and true while the chemist counted out celestial minutes. Black tourmaline cabochons were set into the basket hilt like small planets, each etched with a sigil that caught the light but refused to gleam. The air smelled of frankincense and hot metal, of singed prayer and laboratory ether. When the blade cooled in the quench, the quiet man with the scar bared his palm and pressed it to the flat.
He winced and smiled. “It stings,” he said.
“Good,” said the woman with the coins. “Then it will remember what it hates.”
They tested it the only way that mattered. A Thule charm—half rune, half relay—hummed like a trapped fly under a cloth. The sabre’s edge passed through the air above it and every line of the sigil pulled apart, as if drawn to admit light. The radio in the corner, which hadn’t worked since the ceiling fell in, blurted a single clean note.
“Pledge,” said the chemist. “Not simply to kill. To cleave—truth from lie, oath from treason, alloy from ore.”
“Pledge, then,” said the smith, and the name stuck to the blade like heat.
The Paladin’s Pledge did not ask permission to go to war. It simply went where it was needed, and need was everywhere. In Narvik it parted a cord that tried to rip out a childs soul. In a Belgian village it bit a werewolf’s shadow and found the blood drunk man wolf attached to it ten paces away. In the Scheldt’s drowned fields, a line of mined dykes stayed mined until the Pledge sang along their length; the charges failed like lies told to a child. Some nights the hilt warmed in the hand of a guard who thought himself only guarding; he’d walk three streets further than his orders and find a cellar full of jars with teeth in them and a diabolic warlock who was preying on refuges and soliders alike.
Evil learned quickly to fear the sound it made—no shriek, no trumpet. A low, bees-wing thrumming, the kind that makes you glance over your shoulder without knowing why. It was not loud. It was certain.
Then came a crossing in the dark and rain. An Assault Pioneer section from the Cape Breton Highlanders had been sent forward under bad orders, and the badness of the orders killed as cleanly as any bullet. A truck burned. A map went to ash. The Pledge’s bearer that night—nobody wrote his name; he insisted on that—went down with a laugh and a curse, and the sabre clattered away into a swollen ditch full of barbed wire and broken things.
The war was full of ditches. Most swallowed what fell into them. This one gave something back.
Private (acting lance-corporal by necessity) Hector “Hec” MacInnis pulled himself out of the ditch by the ribbon of a thought that said up. His hands found the sabre’s basket hilt under the murk. He gripped and knew it the way you know that a door is unlocked before you try it. Pain stung his palm, sweet as a nettle, and color came back to the world in narrowed bands: here a wire singing the wrong tune, there a puddle that reflected a roof that wasn’t above it, there a soldier who moved on orders his lungs hadn’t signed.
“On me,” he said, and men who were not his came anyway, because certainty is a kind of rank.
A soulless trooper stepped from the hedgerow—slick oilskin, tidy boots, a rifle with a perfect magazine—and, for a moment, MacInnis apologized to the idea of him. Then he cut. The rifle parted; the uniform tore without tearing; the un-thing inside dented as if it had met an old law about the sanctity of bodies and been found wanting. He felt his grip burn, and beneath the pain, joy: not triumph, not blood-heat. Fittingness. A promise made in a church becoming a promise kept in a field.
By dawn the assault had a road again. By noon word had reached a man whose name had not been on the Holborn roster but whose money had bought the tourmaline. He smiled when the runner’s breathless message ended. “Good,” he said. “It remembers.”
The Pledge never hung on a wall for long. It belonged to the few—not the aristocracy of birth, but the border-guard of conscience. It refused hands that shook for the wrong reasons. It sang under roofs where oaths were kept even when no one was listening. In one winter it slept for six weeks on a shelf in a church hall where a soup line spoke more prayers than the vicar; in spring a girl with a milk pail took it up and carried it until the milk soured and a hollow place under the railway needed filling with something better than bones and hungry corpses.
War ended the way floods end—wetly, with wreckage. There were parades and tribunals and drawers full of photographs nobody opened. The factories that had manufactured nightmares retooled to make peacetime plastics. Men went home with too many sights that haunted them. Women went to work with sleeves rolled up ready to rebuild. The Pledge went out of sight.
It did not go away.
A customs officer on a fog-slung pier in ’56 felt her hand burn, looked up, and saw a man in a shipshape cassock leading a crate marked Medical Equipment away from a ship whose manifest was already a lie. In ’77 a factory fire in West Germany got hot enough to separate the truth from its casing; a bystander with an antique sabre cut a cable and every typewriter in the office upstairs typed STOP. In ’99, a church in Atlantic Canada hummed until the janitor—good man, bad marriage, honest broom—pried up floorboards with the sabre’s point and found the mummified hand of a demon that was poisoning hearts and dreams in his small community.
You can say these were different swords, different stories, that war makes metal superstitious. You can say that if it comforts you. The blade does not care. It recognizes impurity the way a faithful hound recognizes the wrong scent: not with anger, but with purpose. It does not measure itself against numbers. It owes nothing to quotas. It is quality made into edge.
If you should be so unlucky as to touch it with a hand that has signed away mercy, it will feel like ice. If you should be so lucky as to touch it with a hand that has kept a promise it did not want to keep, it will sting you like a small, not unkind, bee. That is how you will know it is yours to carry for a while. Not forever; nothing decent is possessed forever. You will carry it until the work that needs doing knows another hand, and then the Pledge will slip you like a ring that finally comes loose, and you will be grateful without quite knowing why.
There are many horrors. That is their nature: to multiply, to swarm, to fill cracks. The Pledge does not multiply. It does not swarm. It asks to be enough at the right moment, and it is.
On quiet nights, in quiet places, you can sometimes hear, far off, a faint, certain thrumming. It is not a drumbeat. It is not a siren. It is a promise remembering itself—a sting held in reserve, a blade that has learned the difference between cutting to harm and cutting to purify. And if you walk toward that sound with your back straight and your word already chosen, you may find the hilt warm under your palm and the edge bright as a thin line of dawn.
They said the Blitz dropped more than bombs. Sirens rose; streets emptied; and when the smoke crawled back into the alleys, something else came with it—things that walked without pulses, things stitched from kennel and cadaver, things that wore uniforms like masks. Engineers called them field tests. Priests called them blasphemies. Soldiers called them targets until their bullets slowed in the air, as if guilt itself had thickened London’s fog.
Across the fronts the stories multiplied. Plague zombies in the Polish mud. Artificial werewolves slamming into trench walls like battering rams with lungs. Soulless stormtroopers whose eyes were not eyes but lenses—cold, recording, unblinking. The Thule Society had been “disbanded” by memorandum; its pieces slithered instead into new offices with darker carpets. Runes met rivets; claws met calculus. The world had asked for heroes and received them, bright figures in armbands of every flag; but against factories that made nightmares by the hundred, even heroes began to look few.
Few—but not small.
In a battered crypt under a bomb-shorn church off Holborn, five people gathered with what little the city had not yet lost. An Army quartermaster pushed a wooden crate across the stone and set down a cavalry sabre with a broken tip—Pattern 1908, the kind a father might pass to a son with a story in the hinge. A chemist from Cambridge unrolled parchment copied out of older parchment, formulas scribbled upside-down in John Dee’s own crabbed hand. A blacksmith who had learned his forge at sea spat on his palms, looked at the sabre, and said nothing. A woman whose name does not appear in any ledger laid down a small leather bag of coins: sovereigns with faces that had once promised continuity. And the last of the five, a quiet man with a throat scar and a watch set to the minute of his brother’s death, placed a simple rosary on the workbench and said, “Oaths first.”
They did not say the war. They said our promise.
Gold melted with the hiss of a struck match. Silver from altar plate and a lady’s locket joined it, mingling into electrum—pale as moonlight, warm as candlefire. The smith recast the blade straight and true while the chemist counted out celestial minutes. Black tourmaline cabochons were set into the basket hilt like small planets, each etched with a sigil that caught the light but refused to gleam. The air smelled of frankincense and hot metal, of singed prayer and laboratory ether. When the blade cooled in the quench, the quiet man with the scar bared his palm and pressed it to the flat.
He winced and smiled. “It stings,” he said.
“Good,” said the woman with the coins. “Then it will remember what it hates.”
They tested it the only way that mattered. A Thule charm—half rune, half relay—hummed like a trapped fly under a cloth. The sabre’s edge passed through the air above it and every line of the sigil pulled apart, as if drawn to admit light. The radio in the corner, which hadn’t worked since the ceiling fell in, blurted a single clean note.
“Pledge,” said the chemist. “Not simply to kill. To cleave—truth from lie, oath from treason, alloy from ore.”
“Pledge, then,” said the smith, and the name stuck to the blade like heat.
The Paladin’s Pledge did not ask permission to go to war. It simply went where it was needed, and need was everywhere. In Narvik it parted a cord that tried to rip out a childs soul. In a Belgian village it bit a werewolf’s shadow and found the blood drunk man wolf attached to it ten paces away. In the Scheldt’s drowned fields, a line of mined dykes stayed mined until the Pledge sang along their length; the charges failed like lies told to a child. Some nights the hilt warmed in the hand of a guard who thought himself only guarding; he’d walk three streets further than his orders and find a cellar full of jars with teeth in them and a diabolic warlock who was preying on refuges and soliders alike.
Evil learned quickly to fear the sound it made—no shriek, no trumpet. A low, bees-wing thrumming, the kind that makes you glance over your shoulder without knowing why. It was not loud. It was certain.
Then came a crossing in the dark and rain. An Assault Pioneer section from the Cape Breton Highlanders had been sent forward under bad orders, and the badness of the orders killed as cleanly as any bullet. A truck burned. A map went to ash. The Pledge’s bearer that night—nobody wrote his name; he insisted on that—went down with a laugh and a curse, and the sabre clattered away into a swollen ditch full of barbed wire and broken things.
The war was full of ditches. Most swallowed what fell into them. This one gave something back.
Private (acting lance-corporal by necessity) Hector “Hec” MacInnis pulled himself out of the ditch by the ribbon of a thought that said up. His hands found the sabre’s basket hilt under the murk. He gripped and knew it the way you know that a door is unlocked before you try it. Pain stung his palm, sweet as a nettle, and color came back to the world in narrowed bands: here a wire singing the wrong tune, there a puddle that reflected a roof that wasn’t above it, there a soldier who moved on orders his lungs hadn’t signed.
“On me,” he said, and men who were not his came anyway, because certainty is a kind of rank.
A soulless trooper stepped from the hedgerow—slick oilskin, tidy boots, a rifle with a perfect magazine—and, for a moment, MacInnis apologized to the idea of him. Then he cut. The rifle parted; the uniform tore without tearing; the un-thing inside dented as if it had met an old law about the sanctity of bodies and been found wanting. He felt his grip burn, and beneath the pain, joy: not triumph, not blood-heat. Fittingness. A promise made in a church becoming a promise kept in a field.
By dawn the assault had a road again. By noon word had reached a man whose name had not been on the Holborn roster but whose money had bought the tourmaline. He smiled when the runner’s breathless message ended. “Good,” he said. “It remembers.”
The Pledge never hung on a wall for long. It belonged to the few—not the aristocracy of birth, but the border-guard of conscience. It refused hands that shook for the wrong reasons. It sang under roofs where oaths were kept even when no one was listening. In one winter it slept for six weeks on a shelf in a church hall where a soup line spoke more prayers than the vicar; in spring a girl with a milk pail took it up and carried it until the milk soured and a hollow place under the railway needed filling with something better than bones and hungry corpses.
War ended the way floods end—wetly, with wreckage. There were parades and tribunals and drawers full of photographs nobody opened. The factories that had manufactured nightmares retooled to make peacetime plastics. Men went home with too many sights that haunted them. Women went to work with sleeves rolled up ready to rebuild. The Pledge went out of sight.
It did not go away.
A customs officer on a fog-slung pier in ’56 felt her hand burn, looked up, and saw a man in a shipshape cassock leading a crate marked Medical Equipment away from a ship whose manifest was already a lie. In ’77 a factory fire in West Germany got hot enough to separate the truth from its casing; a bystander with an antique sabre cut a cable and every typewriter in the office upstairs typed STOP. In ’99, a church in Atlantic Canada hummed until the janitor—good man, bad marriage, honest broom—pried up floorboards with the sabre’s point and found the mummified hand of a demon that was poisoning hearts and dreams in his small community.
You can say these were different swords, different stories, that war makes metal superstitious. You can say that if it comforts you. The blade does not care. It recognizes impurity the way a faithful hound recognizes the wrong scent: not with anger, but with purpose. It does not measure itself against numbers. It owes nothing to quotas. It is quality made into edge.
If you should be so unlucky as to touch it with a hand that has signed away mercy, it will feel like ice. If you should be so lucky as to touch it with a hand that has kept a promise it did not want to keep, it will sting you like a small, not unkind, bee. That is how you will know it is yours to carry for a while. Not forever; nothing decent is possessed forever. You will carry it until the work that needs doing knows another hand, and then the Pledge will slip you like a ring that finally comes loose, and you will be grateful without quite knowing why.
There are many horrors. That is their nature: to multiply, to swarm, to fill cracks. The Pledge does not multiply. It does not swarm. It asks to be enough at the right moment, and it is.
On quiet nights, in quiet places, you can sometimes hear, far off, a faint, certain thrumming. It is not a drumbeat. It is not a siren. It is a promise remembering itself—a sting held in reserve, a blade that has learned the difference between cutting to harm and cutting to purify. And if you walk toward that sound with your back straight and your word already chosen, you may find the hilt warm under your palm and the edge bright as a thin line of dawn.

Hello, I devoured the beginning of your text, and up until the paragraph “Evil learned quickly,” I was fully immersed—visually, emotionally, and linguistically. That opening line, “things that walked without pulses,” is beautiful. There’s no need for a detailed zombie description—no rotting skin, no pale face, no stumbling gait. That one little phrase says it all (if you have imagination). The five who forge the blade are also well portrayed. There’s something mystical about how the weapon comes into being—and the connection to the prompt theme is spot on. *Thumbs up.* But then the passages become confusing. The sentences feel choppy. There are still powerful, image-rich lines—“The war was full of ditches. Most swallowed what fell into them.”—but overall, I struggled to follow the thread toward the end. The protagonists line up too quickly, and the emotional depth and narrative weight that had been so carefully built begin to dissipate in this staccato rhythm. It feels like you wanted to write more, maybe even in greater detail, but someone with a stopwatch stood beside you and didn’t give you the time. I think if you revisit the ending and give it the space it deserves, you could make it truly epic. Warm regards, Selibaque