An Ordinary Day
"Í ril nilay amanani g'nola lou arlís- nal nimeÞ í cora. A soul believes unsure futures in youth, if only to protect a heart."A freshly sharpened pencil was nestled behind my pointed ear as I sat at Apple's bedroom desk, toiling over papers and parchments of all types. I pulled out the utensil and twiddled it between my fingers, allowing my wavy hair to sheet down my back, a frothy platinum waterfall. The closest I had ever come to teaching another was back home in my cave among my people, trying to teach my cousin to dutch braid. Though the end result looked less elegant maid and more birds' nest, I was satisfied I even tried. But teaching a language, that would be much more difficult. There was the syntax, the grammar, the writing system, the pronunciation and conjugation of words. Still, I did not allow my confidence to wane. Language was my specialty, savior, and only solace. Though I hadn't created a gust of wind that wasn't intentional of late, let alone a tornado or thunderstorm, my writing was still the only thing over which I had complete control. If I couldn't control my magic, at least I could control my words. But what if I couldn't? My words were as much a part of me as my powers, and yet, the latter had failed me time and time again-worst when I most needed them. What if the former followed? Zoning out in my thoughts, for the 17th time this week (I counted), the sounds of the house blurred into nothing but my breathing and the far too slow ticking of the clock on the wall. The clock on the wall! They were supposed to be here five minutes ago! A moment later, Gwendolyn Brickwelle came bounding into the room, shirt on backwards and noticeably frazzled. Apple followed soon after, an unmistakable twinkle in her eye. Understandably, I tried to block the image of what they had been doing from my mind. I resisted the urge to gag, as, unsurprisingly, I couldn't. But, I could change the subject. "Ilaþ, ul elem brin nal ys. Ul elem vou, solail?" They looked at me confusedly. "Hello, it is nice to see you. How are you today?" Gwen shrugged, while Apple simply sat beside her, a stupidly large grin on her face. "All right. I suppose we must start with the Alphabet. Our vowels, first normal and then accented: A, pronounced 'aw' as in saw or 'ah' as in 'cat.'" I, pronounced 'ee' or 'ih' as in hit, U, pronounced 'oo' as in goo, or 'ou' as in foot. O and E do not have accents, being pronounced 'oh' as in snow, and 'eh' as in bed. Then we have our vowel combinations, which have their own symbol in Zimaren. That's the script Niadlic is written in. 'Ya' as in 'Booyah,' 'ow' as in 'cow,' and 'ay or ai' as in 'hay.' Did you get all of that?" their blank stares were enough to say that they in fact did not absorb a single word. I sighed dejectedly. "Alright. We shall start over. From the top." "For the last time, it's called Niádlíc, not Nymphic, Gwen." "What if I cant pronounce that?" I smiled forcefully. "I swear, five more minutes with you two and I'm going back to Nájwist Eldiz- which means "hidden woods" if you care." Apple looked up from the flower she was doodling on her paper. "Wait, so there's a whole freaking forest in there? I thought it was just like a tree or two." "There is a forest. An entirely separate climate as well. It's usually warmer, more humid, and almost pleasant inside. We can grow many crops, which greatly aids our trade with other Creatures. The blackberries are particularly divine." "I never thought I'd say this, but I think I want to live in a cave," Apple said through her teeth. Gwen silently agreed. "Shall we resume our lesson?" My question was a bit more curt than intended, but their distraction had become irritating. "Sure," Apple answered. Her voice was too nonchalant to be encouraging. It wasn't 10 minutes before I was interrupted again. What am I doing wrong? Apple is always a good student. Am I a bad teacher? Is my lesson too dull? Or are the two just curious? "Why are you so distracted," I mumbled, unaware she could hear me. "Sorry, ran out of ADHD meds." "Oh. That explains it." "Dryad school must be tough, if this is primary school stuff." Apple stretched while she spoke. I looked over at Gwen. She had actually fallen asleep. Let me guess, not enough coffee? Defeated, I answered my friend's question. "Niádlíc is actually one of the easier magical languages. Be glad I'm not an elf. Northern Elvish grammar could be completely reconstructed and I would still not be able to understand a word." "That's terrifying, coming from you." "They have seventeen tenses. SEVENTEEN!" My volume accidentally awoke Gwen. "Father Yule?" She said deliriously. I winced. "Anyways, back to our grammar. Adjectives usually come after nouns." "Like Spanish?" queried Gwen. "Like Spanish." Finally, someone was making some connections. I never expected it to be Gwen, but...I continued on. "And always be careful of which version of that noun you use." Apple cocked her head, her short bob swishing back and forth. "Why?" "My great great grandparents on my father's side almost separated because my great great grandmother-a Tree Faerie- accidentally told my great great grandfather, a Half-Mer 'Iþ melora ul," instead of "Iþ alora ul." Gwen grimaced. "Harsh, but I can see why. Considering she just called him an object." "It's even worse than that. In that context, 'Iþ melora ul' means roughly 'I own you-you are my slave, but with a creepy predatory connotation." An ill look spread across Gwen's face."Ok. Oh wow. Yeah I would have dumped her too." For the next 15 seconds nothing but an awkward silence filled the room. "Hey Apple, Iþ alora ul. El Iþ desirnal mif ul." Apple blushed. "Awe, I love you too. Now get over here, you perfect dork." Gwen moved over to sit on her girlfriend's lap, allowing her to boop her nose as one might touch a kitten. Well, at least they had learned something. Even if it was to flirt. I groaned. Nonetheless, it was a distraction from the horrors of the outside world, a fleeting glimmer of hope that kept them going... Yes, if not for everything- and everyone- that wasn't, it might have been another ordinary day.Niádlíc proverb
A scene from my upcoming novel, THE CHRONICLES OF TERANYA. Neely's Niádlíc lessons did manage to keep Apple and Gwen alive until the government was overthrown. However, it came at the price of their relationship. Gwen was ultimately discovered, but had a head start and fled to the Netherlands to live with her father. Apple and her siblings went to live with Eniliád in her cave after things had settled down, and lived a long, fulfilling life.
What a cute story! :D I'm sorry about their eventual fates though. The only specific feedback I have on the story is: ""For the last time, it's called Niádlíc, not Nymphic, Gwen." She wasn't calling it Nymphic, so this made me stop for a while. From the language page: "pronouns always go at the beginning of a statement" But there can be more than one pronoun. What if you have both subject and object pronouns, like in "I love you?" On the' common phrases' section you are probably missing the "--", two lines, which you should have on the beggining and end of the phrase for it to show correctly! Your writing system looks good and seemes to be resonable!
Thank you for the feedback! I’m great with languages yet, but practice makes better!
*not. I’m not great, clearly. Haha
I'm not that good writer yet myself (especially in English which is not my first language), so I'm trying to give people some feedback on languages, because that's what I've actually studied xD