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I really liked the concept of elemental spirits. However, I also had the feeling that the word star could easily be replaced by another word. Maybe you could work on this some more and make it clearer that they really are stars. I also liked your first person perspective for the “research study”. Perhaps you could also deepen your explanations with examples of research to better enable the reader to participate.
Astralis-Challenge 2024 by Blue Fairy 74
Summer Camp is back! Rippling waves lead you to my answers of this year's prompts.
Thank you for this comment ! I'll do my best to work on those improvements. :)