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The Spear With a Soul

I fear that is not a spear, but a man.
— A forgotten Zilopnou general
  The Spear of Zilopnou Is one wrapped in mystery, as there were many alive during his time, there are numerous myths and legends about the spear— none are correct. The spear was one wielded by the famous Tichan Zilopnou, the founder of the nation of Zilopnou. Despite being of great importance to the Lliaqeu— the spear went missing after the late king's death.  

Many Myths

The shorn general

One of most popular myths surrounding the spear is that of Zilopnou's encounter with the Ponouli military leader known as the shorn general. The king faced the general in battle, and according to legend, he had been defeated, and left pinned to the ground beneath the general's heel— his spear just out of reach. Witnesses on the battlefield claim to have seen a verdant light flashing from the scene, and the spear standing upright— plunging itself through the general's heart of its own accord, shearing the shorn general of his flesh.  
And the dreaded general fell,
though his concubines had wished him well,
the spear punctured his heart,
so that from this world,
he would depart.
— The Shorn Poem

Conception

Just as no one knows where the spear has disappeared to, none know of its origins, either.   Many assume it was forged by the famed leader himself, it's unique materials having been procured throughout his own travels.   Others believe it to have been a gift from the heavens, a sign to the Lliaqeu that Tichan Zilopnou was a great leader.
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Author's Notes

Feedback is very much welcome! Whether on the content, or the formatting! Please, point out typos if you spot any!


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Jul 1, 2020 21:28 by Jacob Billings

As always, your writing style is intriguing and enrichens the content of your article. Fun to see what you did with the first prompt. Good luck with the rest of Summer Camp.   (I did also notice that "The Spear of Zilopnou" has no excerpt)

Jul 1, 2020 21:58 by Jacob Billings

(Never mind to the additional note, looks like that's an article for future prompts)

Jul 1, 2020 23:19 by Grace Gittel Lewis

Thank you! And yes, THAT article will be done within the hour!

Jul 2, 2020 02:29 by R. Dylon Elder

WOOOOOT excellent work! I found a little issue here, i believe. "myths and fables legends about the spear" i think there be commas missing, maybe a slash?   lovely myth, and i like how you delve into the many different theories around it. You include so many different stories. I think my favorite detail is the idea that it can only express itself by attack those it reads as malicious. even if it may be false, its a cool idea, and breathes life into the myth. mythical weapons are filled with all kinds of cool little powers.

Jul 2, 2020 04:14 by Grace Gittel Lewis

Thank you! I fixed that sentence!

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