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Qetichnixik

I can feel the seeds sprouting beneath my cracked skin, twisting and turning through my flesh to pierce the surface. It is unbearable...
— A qetichnixik victim
  Qetichnixik, literally meaning "skin of seeds" is a condition that afflicts those who consume a particular potion as treatment for heatstroke, or as a preventative measure against it.  

Staying Cool

Within the searing heat of the Cipou Canyon and its surrounding deserts, heatstroke is a deadly affliction. It is an unfortunately common cause of death for farmers tending to their crops, or anyone who must work outdoors for long periods. It comes as no surprise that they would turn to alchemy in order to prevent it. A core component of this particular potion is the seed of a local variety of fir trees. This concoction allows one to stay out in the sun for significantly longer, by more efficiently ejecting heat from their bodies— as the seeds do to survive the heat. This also serves as an effective treatment for those who have already fallen to heatstroke. However, if ingested in too great an amount— one will begin to develop an unpleasant condition.
Keht-eek-nee-shihk
Type
Magical
Origin
Magical
Cycle
Chronic, Acquired
Rarity
Uncommon

The Sprouts

Some Hontualieu believe the condition to be a method of connecting to the world around them, a pure form of worship.   They will purposefully acquire qetichnixik, and flee into the wild— hoping to become one with the world they live in.

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Jul 4, 2020 23:30 by TC

This was really interesting to read! I can imagine the horror of the seeds sprouting quite well. I can't wait to delve deeper into this world!

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Jul 4, 2020 23:36 by Grace Gittel Lewis

Thank you! Hopefully it won't disappoint!

Jul 6, 2020 22:47 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Yikes! D: The idea of seeds sprouting out of my skin gives me the shivers. I like that different cultures have different views on the condition too.

Emy x
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Jul 7, 2020 01:25 by Grace Gittel Lewis

Thank you! Yeah it's fun to write things around Cipou Canyon since there are two starkly contrasting cultures there that tend to view everything differently!

Jul 14, 2020 19:46 by R. Dylon Elder

Found a little typo, "...who haven already fallen to heatstroke" have or havnt?     I don't like the idea of becoming one with the world like those guys... it sounds remarkably painful.     I love how a major problem of overconsumption is the potion working a little too well. Hypothermia gained by avoiding hyperthermia is just A+   Yeah definitely no. I don't want tree parasites at all. Lol   Love how you set different cultural perceptions, especially the quotes. It's important. Not many show how some medical solutions are seen by different cultures. Birth control comes to mind as a real world example. Great work once more!

Jul 14, 2020 21:44 by Grace Gittel Lewis

Should be "have"— fixed that, thanks!   Oh yes it is very painful, I don't want it either.   Thank you! As both cultures involved here are so starkly different I end up writing their differing views on everything they encounter.

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