Rither
"You must understand, child, that the Atoned does not demand your sorrow. Sorrow is easy, and he has no desire for easy things. What he asks instead is much harder. He asks that you face your deeds and choose, truly choose, every day, to be better than them. He does not redeem anyone, he merely shows you how to kindle the flame and sustain it, even as it burns your hands. The Atoned does not forgive lightly, but when he does... When he does, you will know you have earned it."
Through the Fire
The Atoned walks a path of his own making, a road forged from sorrow and shaped by relentless resolve. His is not the sanctity of perfection but the hard-won grace of redemption. Once, they say, he was like those who now kneel before him: burdened by his own mistakes, haunted by the shadows of deeds that could not be undone. But where others faltered, he endured. Through fire, stone, and unyielding, unending trial, he burned away the worst of himself and emerged, scarred but unbroken, to show others the way. He is no towering figure of divine splendour, his form is weathered and marked by the echoes of his journey. His robes are simple, patched and worn, but his eyes shine with a quiet intensity that can pierce through lies and self-deception. His hands are calloused, the hands of a worker, always building, mending, repairing what has once been shattered. Chains, broken but still gleaming, coil loosely around his wrists; symbols of the burdens he once bore and the freedom he has earned.Tempered by Storms
He does not ask for worship. He does not demand offerings or prayers. Instead he offers a mirror, one that does not flatter but reveals. "Face yourself," he whispers, his voice like the rasp of steel against stone. "You cannot undo what has been done. But you can choose what comes next." Those who seek him do not come lightly, for the path he guides them to is grueling. The Atoned does not forgive cheaply. He requires action: wrongs to be righted, amends to be made, burdens to be carried with purpose. But his is not a path of endless punishment, it is one of transformation. To those who follow it, his presence is a lantern in the dark, his quiet approval a warmth that rekindles hope. The Atoned teaches that redemption is not granted, it is earned, one step at a time. And when it is, it shines brighter than any crown.
Divine Classification
The Atoned, God of Penance
Children
I like him a lot. I love the idea that he teaches that redemption is earnt, rather than given. :)
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I'm glad you enjoyed reading about him. Personally, I just hope he doesn't make someone into Sisyphus to earn their redemption...