A Rusty Ring

Welcome to my second Spooktober adventure! This year, I aim to turn the prompts into a choice-driven folktale, where each article represents a step along a haunted, twisting path through the world of Kena’an. You’ll encounter strange sights, whispers in the mist, and various trials. At the end of each article, you’ll face choices that lead deeper into the story. Some paths are hidden for now, but don’t worry: as the month unfolds, more will reveal themselves. Start your journey at the Ring, and see where the adventure takes you.

 
 

Our story begins in Varakel, a lonely settlement where the sunburst, fertile fields end and the Whispering Woods press close, their shadows swallowing the moonlight behind heavy, restless mists. Few travelers pass this way, for the forest, forever veiled in drifting fog, always seems to stir and murmur just beyond the edge of hearing.

At the forest’s edge lies a great ring of iron: vast, rust-eaten, and half-buried in the soil. It has been there longer than the settlement, older than any name the people can recall. Too heavy to be moved, too ancient to be explained. And so, it simply waits.

At night, when the wind sighs through the pines, the villagers whisper of the ring and the fate of those foolish enough to test it. Some call it a relic from an age of forgotten kings. Others say it is a link torn from a chain that once bound a nightmare beneath the earth. Still others swear it marks the mouth of a grave sealed with curses that bleed into the living world through those who dare disturb it.

Yet, children, being children, cannot resist testing the superstition. They dare one another to lay a hand upon the decaying iron. Most return laughing, their palms smeared orange with rust. Yet there are tales of those who vanished entirely, swallowed by the mist before they could scream. Others came back altered; eyes hollow, voices warped, speaking in riddles and secrets no living soul should know. Whether these stories are true or false remains unproven. Still, whomever you may ask in Varakel, all agree on a single thing:

Never pass through the ring.


And now, dear traveler, it is your turn.

For weeks, your dreams have drawn you here: the same fog, the same ring glowing like dying shimmer of a dawn's lost fire, the same whisper in the silence; calling, waiting. Tonight, you stand before it, breath misting, heart hammering, as the ring looms like a wound in the earth, patient, ancient, and alive.

What will you do?

 
Take a breath and step through the rusty ring
You draw a shuddering breath and step fully across the iron threshold. The air thickens instantly, a biting chill pressing against your chest. Shadows twist unnaturally, stretching and quivering as whispers sharpen into words that almost speak to you. The world behind you collapses into a pale haze; trees, soil, and sky fold into a void. Something ancient settles in your bones, and everything begins to go amiss.  
Trial of Orientation
Generic article | Oct 1, 2025
Touch the ring but do not step through
Your fingers brush the cold, rusted iron. A bolt of something alive and alien surges through you. In an instant, the clearing tilts, dissolving into a swarm of flickering shadows that pierce your eyes and blind your senses. The world you knew falls away, replaced by a trembling, uncanny place where dreams, memories, and horrors mingle, and the sting of the ring's wrath marks you as one no longer fully of this world.  
Trial of Impulse
Generic article | Oct 6, 2025
Step away from the ring and return to your life
The mist coils around your feet as you hesitate. Perhaps some doors are best left unopened. You retreat toward the village, the whispers fading into the night, yet the memory of the ring lingers like a shadow at the edge of your mind. You can continue your life, hoping the dreams that dragged you here will fade… but some part of you knows they may never stop calling.  
Kena'an

A World Forged in Balance. A World Shaped by Conflict

All written content is original, drawn from myth, memory, and madness.

All images are generated via Midjourney using custom prompts by the author, unless otherwise stated.


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Sep 30, 2025 04:15 by Snow Celeste

That was just plain fun!!!!

Oct 4, 2025 12:52 by Imagica

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it <3

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Sep 30, 2025 16:14

Love the idea of the half-buried giant ring!

Oct 4, 2025 12:53 by Imagica

Thanks! This needs an article on its own at some point, I will put it in my schedule :)

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Oct 4, 2025 08:51 by Keon Croucher

I love the idea of choose your own adventure for Spooktober this is a fantastic idea and this piece is a perfect starting point to that tale :D

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Oct 4, 2025 12:54 by Imagica

Thanks Keon! I hope I will manage to keep it spooky and interesting until the end :)

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Oct 20, 2025 13:03 by Marc Zipper

As I stare at the ring recalling my dreams about it. I think to myself you know something amazing scary and cool is going to happen or I have been on something I need to seek some help. I take a breath and then I take step right into it.     This is so cool and awesome I love people who can write choose their own adventure stories amazing can't wait to see where this goes.

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Nov 3, 2025 09:15 by Imagica

Thank you for this lovely comment!! I will do my best to finish the final articles soon, even though Spooktober is over!

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Dec 5, 2025 23:58 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

The imagery of the half-buried ring is great. I'm curious to read more about it. Time to follow this tale, though. :D

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Dec 10, 2025 09:16 by Imagica

Thank you!! I am glad you are following the tale, and also very sorry I haven't finished it yet!!

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