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This article is an entry to Chapter 1 of Tyrdal's The Longest Journey!


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Sep 7, 2024 21:36 by Secere Laetes

A nice hell or a nice purgatory, whichever you prefer. I really liked the idea of how someone became a kind of god over it. Otherwise, I wonder if it wouldn't be nice - in terms of the devils - if more psychological horror were built in. I'd also be interested to know what happens to the sinners who have already failed once (which should have happened to anyone who has been there for a while) and then can't have anything cut off because it's no longer there... or do the body parts grow back?

Oct 7, 2024 11:37 by CoolG

Interesting questions :O I'll think about those

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Oct 8, 2024 19:33

Congratulations on completing the first chapter of "The longest journey". As promised, here is a little memento to remember your travels - I hope to see you in chapter 2!  

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Oct 9, 2024 10:22 by CoolG

OMG thank you Tyrdal!! I am honoured to have participated ^^

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Oct 15, 2024 19:15

Unfortunately, there was a slight mixup with the article link for chapter 2. Here is the correct link for Chapter 2. Hope to see you there!

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