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Hidden Languages

by hughpierre
of The Lost Realms
Cryptolithic is designed to preserve culturally and historically significant records. It is purely writing based and gives the language a clear and meaningful function in the world.

Devin of World of Seven Seas
Overusing common swears in fictional settings can diminish immersion.

Currently, examples focus on exclamations of surprise or frustration, but still provides a rounded sense of how the language is used in daily life.

Alikzander Wulfe of Tanaria
One effective way to enhance a piece is to engage the reader's senses more directly.

Instead of just describing sounds, evoke them through onomatopoeia, emotional resonance and visual aspects.

Cait Brinsmead of The Sorrow of Souls Quartet
This excels at embedding the language within a broader cultural and political context.

It also shows the responses to a language actively being repressed.

Harlen Ogni of Tellus
Colourful idioms and phrases are grouped into categories in an outstanding job describing how creole evolved from necessity. This lends it credibility.

ATLAS SAPE of Maledictus
A lot of technical detail but highly creative.

There is an overwhelming amount of information that could deter readers and yet I find it believable In an abstract alien way.

Adrian Waite of Colossus
This one blends visual, auditory and tactile imagery to make the concept come alive.

firebrat of Lords of Lockhinge
An extraordinarily well thought-out language that deeply integrates the physiology of its speakers into its characteristics.

Ørvar Blackwood of Aeldrithius
The description of a runic alphabet paints a vivid picture of their practical use; and succinct enough to maintain reader engagement.

Demongrey of The Million Islands
The conversational tone invites the reader to engage on a personal level.

The writer lends a holistic view of Amganad and its speakers that makes it feel real; inspite of its esoteric effects.

Reading Challenge - Worldember 2024
Generic article | Feb 3, 2025

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Feb 3, 2025 20:33

Thanks for including Amganad on your list!

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