The Waters of Immortality

The heavy door groaned open, revealing a cramped study cloaked in shadows. Ancient scrolls spilled from overflowing shelves, their brittle edges crumbling,, while yellowed walls bore chaotic scribblings and arcane symbols.
  In the room's darkest corner, the hunched figure of a man, ancient and withered, sat slumped over in an carved wooden chair. His skin, leathery and wrinkled, hung loosely on its bony frame. Eyes, once bright as desert stars, were now dull and distant, sunken pits in a face etched with the weight of ages. A tangled mass of white hair framed a visage that had witnessed the rise and fall of empires, now hidden under an ornate, frayed cowl .
  Ayla hesitated at the threshold, cold dread creeping up her spine. She stared, wide-eyed, at the living husk before her. The silence in the room was suffocating, broken only by the man's labored breathing, each rasping wheeze carrying the musty scent of decaying parchment and forgotten tombs. Slowly, as if burdened by the weight of centuries, the figure lifted its gaze.
"Come closer," the voice rasped, a whisper that seemed to scrape against the silence. It was a voice worn down by the sands of time, each word steeped with the weight of eons, of lost civilizations and forbidden knowledge.
  "I know why you came. "the voice rasped, a dry cough rattling in his chest. "I have seen the rise and fall of empires, the death and birth of constellations, Yet, I remain, a prisoner chained to this realm, a living specter in a world that is no longer mine."   A chill, deeper than any desert's night, seeped into Ayla's bones. She had sought immortality, a way to cheat death, but this...this was twisted perversion of life, a living nightmare, a curse that made death a mercy.
The figure's gnarled hand extended towards her, offering a vial of shimmering blue liquid. "Drink this," it whispered, "and taste immortality." Heart pounding, she recoiled in horror. A chilling cackle erupted from the man's withered lips as Ayla turned and fled, the heavy door slamming shut behind her , sealing the study in silence and shadows,
  To this day, amongst the spires and laboratories of Al'Nahar, rumors swirl like desert winds through the Alchemist's Guild, whispering of a secret, forbidden scroll, penned by the mad prophet Hassan Ri'shar himself.
Locked away in the deepest vaults, protected by divine magic, this ancient parchment tells of an astonishing elixir—a liquid of crystalline blue fire capable of granting eternal life. A prize most coveted by those who would sacrifice anything to avoid facing divine judgment beyond the River of Souls.

Brewed from the rarest of ingredients, this alchemical wonder is said to be a pinnacle of the secret arts. Waters from the Whispering Well and petals from the Dim'kalyr's flower are infused in a cauldron of Obsidian, mingled with tears of the Kasharian Jasmine. Enriched with forbidden celestial magic, the finished potion shimmers with an otherworldly, glacial light, each drop whispering with the promise of everlasting life. Yet, as all these things do, such divine power comes at a terrible cost.

To partake of the elixir is to pay the ultimate price: the forfeiture of one's soul. It is to sever oneself from the River of Souls, becoming a vessel of endless existence, trapped in a mortal body that shall not die, forever yearning for the solace of oblivion that never comes. True to its promise, this elixir, a cruel mockery of life, offers only immortality—nothing more.

Those few who have dared drink from this forbidden cup have met a fate far worse than death. Forever removed from the River of Souls, they become shadows of their former selves, haunted by an eternity of existence. Eyes, once filled with the spark of life, now hold a vacant stare that only the walking dead can match. Laughter, once full of dancing joy, now wails a mournful dirge, all their hope turned to dust, carried away on the eternal desert winds.

Whether this cursed scroll was whispered into the ears of the mad prophet by the gods themselves or malevolent spirits, no one knows. But its very existence has driven many a heart to madness, a cursed oasis in the desert of lost knowledge, beckoning the unwary with the greatest of mortal desires—to live forever. The whispers of its existence continue, promising eternal life, while the desert wind carry the mournful cries of the pitiful souls who already paid the price.
Excerpt from the forbidden scrolls of
Hassan Ri'shar, the mad prophet


Hearken, seekers, to the waters of forever,
a forbidden secret, a gift veiled in darkness.
Born of the stars, forged in the earth's core
Infused with sorrow's mournful weep.   To find the source, a perilous quest,
Seek the Well's whisper, the flower's dream.
the bloom in stormy desert's night,
the tears of peace that were not shed,
and Io, then forge them in the dark of night.


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Nov 7, 2024 21:39

This is some of your very best work; I love it.

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Nov 20, 2024 10:10

Thank you so much Demongrey, really appreciate the kind words.

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Nov 8, 2024 07:38 by Imagica

Great job Tyrdal <3 The prose is fantastic!

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Nov 20, 2024 10:14

Thank you so much!

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Nov 8, 2024 09:33 by CoolG

A chilling tale about the cost of seek immortality; I love it!

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Nov 20, 2024 10:18

Glad to hear that, thank you.

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Nov 10, 2024 17:04 by Alan Byers

Just plain excellent writing here, well done Tyrdal.

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Nov 20, 2024 10:18

Well, that made my day, thank you!

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Nov 11, 2024 01:10 by Ephraïm Boateng

What a great opening prose! And the rest of the article is fantastic too!

Nov 20, 2024 10:14

My favorite part of this article - thank you so much for the praise.

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Nov 16, 2024 13:59 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Immortality is not worth that cost. Love the opening prose. :)

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Nov 20, 2024 10:13

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it, the opening prose is my favorite part of this article.

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Feb 12, 2025 11:03

Great prose piece at the start, really sets the tone right. No wonder people don't want that kind of immortalilty it sounds horrible.

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