Samar Sha'haq

The sands of Madness




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A peaceful rest
  The last thing he felt was the gentle give of the sand beneath his back, a surprising softness where there should have been only scorching grit. Slowly, a serene smile, a stranger's smile, stretched across his cracked, sun-baked lips. The vast, indifferent sky, once a canvas of torment, had finally settled into a peaceful, unbroken blue above him. He had found it at last: Not water, not escape, but the quiet, perfect peace where the land's torment could no longer reach. His racing thoughts, once a screaming maelstrom, were now a whisper, softly caressing the broken home of a soul - and then there was nothing at all.   He had just closed his eyes moments before. He had fallen into the soft pillows of his bed, utterly exhausted from his harrowing flight from the sands. The city he so desperately sought had buzzed with the comforting embrace of life - merchants hawking wares, the laughter of children and the clatter of plates from a nearby inn. The scent of roasted lamb still clung to his clothes. He remembered the first, blissful gulp of cool, clean water, the taste so sweet, it made him weep with joy. He remembered the solid city walls, the firm ground, the reassuring weight of reality that had promised salvation after the endless, shifting madness of the sands. "It's over, it's finally over" he had whispered to himself again and again, the words a calming balm to his soul as he drifted off to sleep, finally home.
But when he opened his eyes, the solace shattered abruptly. With a sickening lurch, the comforting hum of the city twisted into a low, discordant thrum, vibrating behind his eyes, turning colors into bitter shadows on his tongue, and twisting light into a torment that clawed at his soul through tear-filled eyes. The cheerful banter had dissolved into a chilling, childish cackle carried on a breeze that wasn't there, bearing madness on its breath. The solid walls shimmered, their edges blurring, their stones dissolving into shimmering heat haze as he watched. The faces he’d found solace in the night before—the innkeeper, the cheerful patrons—became fleeting, agonizing glimpses of forgotten love, their features dissolving into dust as he tried to grasp them. The air grew thick and heavy. The suffocating heat of the desert pressed in, not from outside, but blooming from the wavering sights around him like cruel flowers of despair.   His thoughts wandered – he once had set out with a heart full of purpose, now carried away on the currents of the madness and despair. The desert peaks, once distant and majestic, suddenly contorted into grotesque, skeletal formations of black glass that shattered to make way to a plane of salt in rainbow colors. The sky, a boundless, blank expanse, was no longer what it had been; it spun through a kaleidoscope of violent hues, cycles of day and night compressed into frantic blinks, while the single sun fractured into multiple, malevolent eyes that cast a dizzying web of overlapping, dancing shadows around his lurching figure. Every step he’d taken across the dunes had shifted beneath him, each a slightly different texture: sand, bone, leaves, sand, glass, silk, water...but when he looked there was only sand. The emptiness felt like a vast, cruel mind, playing with him, mocking him with ever new torments.   He remembered the initial allure, the quiet majesty of the boundless dunes stretching out under a sky of pristine, deceptive clarity. He had entered this place with a strange, almost eager curiosity, drawn by tales of its beauty, its vastness, perhaps even its hidden truths. A naive smile had touched his lips then, a simple adventurer ready to embrace the boundless secrets of the Sands of Madness, to solve its mysteries that eluded so many before him, utterly blind to the reality that awaited him.
 


Samar Sha'haq, the sands of madness, where the world itself is a lie. Many a traveler, unaware of its ever-shifting size, has been swallowed by it. It's an expanse of deceit and illusions, woven from lies that touch every grain of sand and every breath of air, a place where the land itself whispers with a traitorous tongue.   Within this place, one's reality begins to fray. A distant gleam might promise water, its cool scent already on your lips, only to dissolve into sand as you take the first sip, leaving behind nothing but cruel, parched despair. The light itself plays cruel tricks, painting the sky with impossible, fleeting colors that defy even the sun's presence, or causing familiar dunes to change to strange, unknown landmarks when your back is turned. Whether you are driven by a desperate search, lured by a phantom promise, or simply strayed too far, all reason for being here quickly fades, and soon only escape matters. For within these shifting dunes, the greatest threat is not the sun's unforgiving glare, nor the endless thirst, but the fracture of your own senses, a journey into insanity from which few truly return.  

A fractured land

 

A smile of perfect peace

It is said that some, finally giving in to the overwhelming despair, their grasp on reality slipping, simply lie down, a horrifyingly serene smile twisting their cracked lips. Their minds have fled to a place of perfect, false peace, a realm where the Sands of Madness can no longer reach them.

  Beneath a sky utterly devoid of solace, madness screams into life in cruel, jagged fragments, born from the scorching howl of broken hearts, the iron grasp of despair, and the icy sting of betrayal—the only trace left of those who vanished here. This is a region that defies maps and paths, shrinking and growing like the bellows of a terrifying beast that devours wanderers whole, its shifting borders swallowing the unwary without warning. Few who enter ever return; those who do are shattered souls, mere shells of their former selves.   To enter these twisted wastes is to step into a world that frays at the edges and crumbles with the discordant shatter of broken thoughts. One minute, you wander a vast, silent expanse of dunes beneath a deceptively serene sky. The next, the very horizons contort, a canvas of insanity painted by a mad god. The sun weeps blood, and a strange moon hangs above like a bloated corpse, vast as the heavens and scarred with faces you almost recognize in the screaming back of your mind. The howling wind carries the touch of a broken bell and the chilling laughter of an unborn child. The sun's hateful glare tears at you, its very rays braided into clawing hands of madness. Colors dance with the taste of thunder on your tongue, and sounds shimmer with a light that burns behind closed eyes. Dunes shift into the fleeting faces of loved ones, long lost or never met, their features crumbling into dust the moment your gaze lingers or your back is turned.Colors shriek with the taste of rusted blood on your tongue, and a scream you notice as your own rough voice echoes across the dunes. Shadows writhe on the ground around you like twisted tendrils, cast by thin air and as you stare onto the ground, the sand begins to fall upwards.   All around you, the boundless dunes rise and fall like the slow, rhythmic breath of some colossal, sleeping entity. You blink and distant peaks shimmer into existence, only to twist into impossible, crystalline structures that reflect your terror-stricken face with wide, bleeding eyes. Then, whether in a fleeting second or after endless hours of wandering, the landscape suddenly flattens into an endless, featureless plain under a night sky that bears not a single star of hope. Even the silence here is a twisted, cruel thing - profound, absolute, broken only by the frantic pounding of one's own heart. Yet sometimes, just at the edge of hearing, a mournful music drifts on the non-existent breeze, weaving a tapestry of longing and sorrow that slowly unravels your sanity. It's the phantom touch of a lost hand, the echo of a forgotten name, each note a barb hooking into the tender flesh of your soul- a melody of what you loved, played on instruments that do not exist, by hands you cannot see, a symphony of specters.   There is no pattern, no logic, no malevolent entity to challenge - only an endless, ever changing expanse that turns reality inside out.

The birth of insanity

  Travelers, driven to the brink of madness, stumble out of these sands back into vibrant, bustling cities. They eat, drink, clinging to fleeting solace, and sleep, utterly convinced the nightmare is finally over. But awakening in the cruelly familiar, suffocating heat and the endless, shimmering expanse of dunes where they once laid their head to rest is what pushes open the gates into madness. Time ceases to have meaning; days bleed into weeks, or weeks compress into agonizing hours. All that is left is a twisted hell where even time has forsaken its throne. Memories fray, identities blur, and worse, the constant torment of what is real and what is illusion becomes unbearable. The gnawing fear of death slips its reign to a far worse fate: the terror of never truly escaping, of being forever trapped in a looping, inescapable nightmare, doomed to wander an eternity of false dawns and phantom cities. And as the last foundations of perception crumble, nothing but the empty, sobbing rubble of a shattered mind remains, carried away on the winds of madness.

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Jul 17, 2025 20:43

Ah, the lyrical flow, the word usage, the atmosphere... a pleasure to read, as always! <3

Jul 17, 2025 23:13 by Keon Croucher

Beautiful tempo, the word usage exquisite. You engage all the senses, not merely describing the locale, but taking us on a journey both fabulous and harrowing, letting us experience but a taste, a flickering sample of the wonder and danger of this Sands. Masterfully written, a pleasure to read, and most certainly a locale I shall be adding to my collection :)

Keon Croucher, Chronicler of the Age of Revitalization
Jul 19, 2025 13:55 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Definitely not a place anyone should visit, but your language use is beautiful here.

Emy x
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