Kurash'nar, the Unseen Hunger

Bringers of Misfortune

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Echoes of the void
  The plea had reached the sun-baked halls of Al'Nahar's Adventurers Guild days ago, a summons of desperation that still sent a true chill through Kaelen's very marrow. He'd seen countless grim fates, but nothing had prepared him for this — a village frozen in despair.
The communal hall, its once-proud roof now a skeletal cage of charred timbers, stood abandoned, remnants of a battle that had stripped the village of its heart months ago. Villagers, gaunt and silent, huddled in the shade of its crumbling mud-brick walls, their eyes holding a flat, vacant hopelessness deeper than any battle scar. No cries for help, no pleas for aid, not even a greeting – just an all-encompassing, unnerving quiet.
The air here was thin, unnaturally cold despite the midday sun, carrying the faint tang of ash and ozone. Even the wind, usually a scorching, howling breath from the Obsidian Wastes, felt dead, its rustle through the town's square hollow and lifeless, as if every whisper had been plucked from its currents.
He began to sweep the few, ash-covered streets, clutching the grip of his scimitar, seeking the source of such misery. Children sat unmoving, staring vacantly. Yet he saw no lurking beast, no dangers at all. Just emptiness.   Following the pull of his instincts towards the ruins of a collapsed hearth, he pushed forward. His every step felt heavier, each breath more labored. His fighting instincts screamed, warning him of an enemy, yet his darting eyes found nothing. He swung his scimitar blindly, a wild arc through the empty space. The bronze met nothing. Instead, his arm felt a sudden, profound emptiness, a chilling absence of sensation that sapped his strength instantly, forcing a grunt from his lips. He stumbled back, his mind reeling from the unseen assault.

This wasn't some beast. This was... an absence. An encroaching void, somehow alive. He gathered a breath, pushing against it not with physical might, but with sheer force of will and presence, cornering it against the crumbled remains of the village well. It recoiled, a ripple of frigid air hitting him like a physical blow. Kaelen gritted his teeth, muscles burning, calling upon his divine beliefs, boxing it in. The strange, cold pressure intensified, searing his lungs with each desperate breath. The air around the unseen entity began to swirl, picking up dust and debris from the parched ground. A cold, consuming emptiness spread, sucking the last remnants of warmth and light from everything it touched

Then, the pressure snapped. With a soundless roar that tore through Kaelen's very bones, the distortion exploded inward. The swirling dust and ash erupted, not outwards, but inwards, sucking everything into its terrible core, forming a monstrous pillar of swirling smoke and ash. It towered over him, veins of glowing, cold azure light erupting from deep within the roiling black. Its presence stole all sound, leaving only the echoing silence of despair, the unbearable weight of what had been lost. The shadows around Kaelen darkened, the edges of his vision encroaching. Abyssal night threatened to claim him. Then, a soft, golden light erupted along the ornaments across Kaelen's bronze scimitar – a flickering hope against the utter darkness before him.



 
   
This place awaits the whispers of fate.
Kurash'nar are beings born of shadow, fleeting as smoke, burning with a coldness that sears even the desert's heat. The Kaharan people speak of these bringers of misfortune only in hushed tones, for calling their name openly might just draw their attention – a whispering, malignant terror that lurks in the shadows.


Nature and Manifestation

  The Kurash'nar don't stalk the land with willful intent or even malice. Their manifestation is a subtle thing, a small distortion of the very air—just like a tiny heat haze above desert sands but infused with an unnatural coldness, a shiver in the summer's heat, or the shimmer of a distant mirage carrying the faint tang of ash and ozone. Their form is a whisper, a fleeting, almost invisible movement just in the corner of one's eyes that suggests a presence where only emptiness should be.   On the rare occasions where they are cornered or confronted, they show their true form: towering columns of swirling smoke and ash, shot through with veins of glowing, cold azure light that burn from within. Their touch, if they ever make contact, is said to be like a sudden, profound emptiness—a chilling absence of feeling that leaves one drained and exhausted. And while the clouds leave no physical trace, no claw marks or scorchings, what remains is the echoing silence of despair on memories that once were and the chilling void of what has been lost.   To the Kaharan people, they are "Whispers of Misfortune," unseen predators preying not on bodies, but on raw, potent despair and misery. Drawn to the plight of mortals, they gorge themselves on human suffering to survive. They are drawn to emotional pain, to places and individuals where sorrow, despair, bitterness, and loss are most potent, amplifying these feelings within their victims. The more profound the suffering, the stronger and more sated the Kurash'nar becomes, gaining in subtle power and allowing it to manifest with slightly more clarity.   They have no goals, no aims, no purpose besides their very existence - but the path they leave is littered not with physical scars, but shattered spirits and empty husks utterly devoid of hope or joy forever.   And worse, spoken only in hushed voices amongst the wisest of scholars and the most forbidden of scrolls there are rumors of a disturbing, perhaps distant, kinship between the Kurash'nar and the Kurash'tarr - another being born of roiling shadow, but of fire in place of coldness - one which is infinitely more dangerous and driven by a raging, alien intellect.      

Origins

  It is said the first of the Kurash'nar came to be with the first thought of hate and misery. Their creation was not a willful act of deity or demon, nor a natural one - they formed themselves from the deepest, most pervasive currents of anguish, bitterness, and regret that have ever plagued sentient life. Some scholars who dared to research them speculate that they are the very echo of ancient calamities, the collective despair of fallen empires and countless lost lives given insidious, semi-sentient form—an everlasting hunger. They are thought to be as old as suffering itself, existing in a realm just beyond the veil, occasionally ripping holes through it to feast on places of widespread misery.    

The Kurash'nar's Shadow

 
For centuries, storytellers have woven tales of beings born of roaring ash and frozen fire, entities of despair given form to devour the souls of the living. These stories took root in every culture, every home, subtly reshaping every aspect of life. Across sun-baked plains, windswept seas, and the mire's emerald depths—the people of Aran'sha embrace
A single drop of water shared is a spring the darkness cannot still.
Kaharan Proverb
For centuries, storytellers have woven tales of beings born of roaring ash and frozen fire, entities of despair given form to devour the souls of the living. These stories took root in every culture, every home, subtly reshaping every aspect of life. Across sun-baked plains, windswept seas, and the mire's emerald depths—the people of Aran'sha embrace simple pleasures, shared laughter, and strive for acts of unexpected kindness. Yet, the Kurash'nar are never truly vanquished; they endure, ever seeking purchase in silent despair and every spark of hope that flickers and dies. The truest defense against the Kurash'nar isn't a blade; it's the unwavering light of life lived without regret.   The way of life on this continent isn't an easy one, but most cultures believe that openly speaking one's feelings and emotions is a path to a soul steeped in light. While not every culture across the continent embraces this practice with the same openness, many believe the fates will smile gently on those who do, and each finds their unique way to shed their burdens.   The Mahani sculpt masks from clay, imbuing them with grief, then ritually shatter them under the twin moons, casting off their old selves. In Ri'kahar, those burdened by sorrows gather at dawn by shifting dunes, whispering their sorrows into handfuls of golden sand, releasing them to be carried away on the eternal winds to be forgotten forever. Along the Coast of Winds, the people of Sahil Al'Riyay carve their unspoken anguish into river stones, entrusting them to the turbulent, indifferent sea to be washed away forever.   All these rituals aim to shed one's burdens and to ward off evil and misfortune. Over time, countless other subtle charms and regional customs emerged. By far the most recognized one is the Eye of the Eclipse—an ever-present safeguard against misfortune and gloom. It's commonly used when faced with the unnatural or simply ill omens as a quick hand gesture, but also worn as a talisman or even carved into homes —a prayer to the twin moons for shelter against all ill.

Qal'Rasan - The Burdened Weavers

 
For those lost in the whims of a Kurash'nar there is little hope but the Qal'rasan. Burdened Weavers - these tragic heroes ensnare Kurash'nar by making their very life a symphony of misery, a siren's call the entities cannot resist - and once ensnared they bind the entities' essence into intricate, swirling
The Qal-Rasan bear the storm within, so others may still see the heavens.
tattoos etched onto their own skin. They are living, haunted prisons. While the cost is high, they possess a terrifying power: The ability to twist the fates, to sow discord or bring misfortune upon their enemies. However, this price is paid in their very life force: Weavers become gaunt, haunted, and isolated, often facing a slow descent into madness and eventual consumption by the very despair they sought to contain - with the only small blessing that the imprisoned Kurash'nar follow them into oblivion.  

Khalar'nar, the Empty Vessels

 
Beware the too-still face, for where sorrow finds no voice, the darkness finds open doors.

From the Lamentations of Elder Mi'ran
Empty Vessels, the hollow ones - these are individuals who, driven by the illusion of power or an escape from unbearable reality, willingly embrace a Kurash'nar's presence rather than binding it. This is an act of ultimate surrender, and while an initial illusory peace reigns, it masks the entity's
true cost. Once unleashed, the Kurash'nar subtly warps the host's perception, turning them into living plague hosts of tragedy and misfortune as it further gorges itself.
The signs are subtle: an empty vessel rarely shows emotion and is almost apathetic to the happenings around them while their very essence is consumed. The ultimate fate of an Empty Vessel is the death of a soul, leaving behind a living, breathing husk - although a few vessels have been known to simply turn to dust, a death devoid of sorrow.

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Jun 5, 2025 05:40 by Joella Kay

Well written and quite chilling...

Jun 5, 2025 14:29

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it!

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Jun 5, 2025 13:27 by Imagica

Well, this is haunting, in the best possible way! I loved it, especially the prose in that fantastic scroll. The description of the Qal-Rasan and the Empty Vessels are excellent world building, and they actually give me a lot of inspiration for my Hollowed faction :) One question though, is it possible for a Qal-Rasan to become an empty vessel? I mean they trap the Kurash'nar into their tattoos, but could they be swayed or tricked by it to end up possessed?

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Jun 5, 2025 14:29

Glad you enjoyed it! And that's a fantastic question! And something I had already planned for - we will explore the connection between empty vessels and Qal Rasan further in their dedicated articles. I might have started on those already..so stay tuned for more tales from beyond the veil.

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Jun 21, 2025 19:21 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

So creepy. I am really interested to learn more about the Qal'Rasan.

Emy x
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Jun 21, 2025 20:52

You are in luck - they will get their full article, as will the Khalar'nar.

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