Heart of the storm

Into the dark

The sandstorm had come out of nowhere. One moment, the desert stretched endlessly before them, shimmering gold under a clear, relentless sun. The next, a roaring, churning wall of ocher sand, a colossal tidal wave of dust and debris, had risen on the horizon, devouring sky, sun, and everything else in its path.  
Jamal, his breath rasping, pulled his scarf higher, the rough-spun fabric brushing against the weathered leather of his armor. The fine, abrasive grit had already found its way into every crevice, stinging his eyes and grating against his teeth. Beside him, Rami stumbled, his usual graceful stride replaced by a desperate, lurching run as they fought their way through the churning haze in the hope for shelter. The air wailed, a raging fury that tore at their clothes and skin with claws of wind and sand. It was a roiling maelstrom of shades and dust, a blinding vortex that swallowed all light, turning day into a choking, disorienting twilight.

"Can't...breathe!" Rami coughed, his voice raw, clutching at Jamal's arm. Jamal squeezed his hand, their fingers intertwining, a familiar, desperate anchor in the maelstrom. He knew the desert, knew that she was not a gentle mistress, but this was a rage rarely seen. The entrance to their hope, an ancient cave, was somewhere ahead, a dark maw that promised salvation.
My path, once lost, your presence wove,   My shelter now, your strength, my heart can rove.   Your hand, the curve of mine, a perfect fit,   Your gaze, the desert sky, where blue is lit.   Brown hair frames eyes, a starlight's gleam,   My truest love, in souls depth, I dream.

— From the personal diary of Rami Kal'fir

but the wind whipped them sideways, pushing them back with relentless force. Each step was a battle, their feet sinking into the shifting dunes, the sand biting at their ankles like some primordial beast. A sudden, violent gust nearly ripped Rami from his grasp, but Jamal held firm, muscles straining, pulling them both forward through the swirling chaos, with a grip forged in shared hardship and a love that ran deeper than the desert itself.

Then, just as despair began to whisper even in Jamal's mind, a shadowy wall appeared in the chaos. They veered towards it, grasping at the rough stone, hands scrabbling for purchase. With a final, desperate surge of adrenaline, Jamal pulled Rami towards the gaping darkness.

 

They plunged into sudden silence. The roar of the sandstorm, a moment ago a deafening, battering assault, now muted to a distant, hungry growl of an unsated beast. Coughing and sputtering, Rami leaned heavily against Jamal, his body trembling with exhaustion. They stood quietly, chests heaving, lungs burning, finding a shared, shaky balance against the rough stone. Relief, sharp and dizzying, washed over them both. Rami looked down at their hands, still tightly clasped, and offered Jamal a weak, wavering smile. Neither of them let go. Jamal grinned back and stumbling away from the roaring maw of the entrance guided them towards the cool, damp cave wall further back.

 

Still clinging to each other, they sank to the cool, gritty floor of the cave. Jamal eased them down softly, and Rami shifted, settling them comfortably against the rough stone. With a soft sigh, Jamal rested his head on Rami's chest, feeling the steady beat of his heart beneath his cheek. Rami's fingers began to idly trace patterns on Jamal's back, a tender, familiar touch that spoke volumes without a single word. They lay there, entwined in gentle darkness, listening to the muffled roar of the sandstorm outside, the desert's fury slowly fading beyond their small, comforting stillness.

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Author's Notes

This entry was written for the 2025 "Show your Colors" Challenge.
It was definitely outside of my comfort zone as a writer, but hugely enjoyable to write - thanks Rin and Mochi for hosting this challenge!

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Jun 24, 2025 10:18 by Jacqueline Taylor

This was breathtaking — the sandstorm felt alive, a brutal, roaring force that tore at every sense. But beneath the chaos, Jamal and Rami’s bond shone with quiet strength, their love anchoring them as the desert tried to rip them apart. The cave’s silence was a tender contrast, wrapping them in a moment of hard-won peace. In just a few heartbeats, you captured both the fury of nature and the resilience of connection. Simply stunning <3

Piggie
Jun 26, 2025 00:21 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Beautiful prose. You did such a great job for it being outside of your comfort zone.

Emy x
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Jun 27, 2025 08:25

Ok jetzt hab ich das Gefühl ich müsste für Stunden duschen um den sand wieder los zu werden!
Sehr, sehr gute Beschreibung, der Sturm wurde richtig lebendig, nicht nur real, nein LEBENDIG!!

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