The Four of the North
Heroes of Anéginnis
Type
Military, Other
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Very nice, as can be expected. I like how the resonance article left enough of an impression that I can understand what they are capable of just from thenin world terms like ace, vibril, etc. I found a little error here, "He is the most experience, a fully trained Ace Resonator" Expirienced I think. Their founding is pretty cool and beautifully detailed. I love the depth. I found an error there as well, "he setting himself up as a distant uncle. For the following five" You could remove the he or make it he set. Well done. A good organization and still, the intrigue builds for the world. I want to know more about the politics involved in the world, hinted at with the mention of the Venix War, among other things.
That's great to hear considering the timesink that making articles for each one is -- meaning it'll be months before each one has a detailed explanation. Thanks for the catches. I was testing out Eulicid with all of these articles in this world so my spelling isn't great since Grammarly abandoned me. Politics. Dear me. I've not even begun to consider political relationships outside of my alliance article. There's way too many nations and I've focused on the magic system. I shall get to that before... the end of time. Maybe. Thanks for checking it out :D
No problem at all. Nothing wrong with that. It's an excellent system based on what ive read. No problem at all.