I stand before a mesa, black and grey stone walls that stretch for miles. I see massive metal doors, lined with gorgeous geometric shapes carved into the steel. The doors are open. Someone's already inside. I've been standing here for at least five minutes. The visions, I understand them now. These are not meant to show me the future. They show me possibilities. I see them now, despite being awake. I see where I succeed, but I see where I fail too. I fail over and over again. My stomach twists and turns as I remember the flash of pain; the moment of impact from antimatter rounds. I fail more often than not. I don't want to do this alone. Why did they have to stay behind. I heard the rails echoing just moments ago. It's so quiet now. Is Fraeia still alive? What should I do? I have to do something. I have to push through the fear. It's time. With a single trembling step, I enter the bunker.
The walls are made of stone and metal. I walk down a corridor with branching paths that lead to rooms, each room filled with coffins. The further I go, the darker it gets. It's near pitch black by the time I reach the command center. I notice the light first, a blinding white that hurts as my eyes try to adjust I hear a voice, angry and bitter. It echoes down the hall as I creep closer to the threshold. As I peek inside, I notice a glare from the wall, a camera. I freeze as the lens opens and narrows. The bunker is alive, dormant but aware. I hear the voice again, louder than before. I can even make out what he says, "Yes, I give my consent. Why aren't you working?" I remember the message from my visions. Maybe it was never me at the console. On a hunch, I look at the lens and nod. I feel it, a rush of heat that starts in my head and passes through my entire body. Caesar, I think to myself, That's your name, right? It hears me. The lens flutters as if responding. It can hear my thoughts. I see the man in the command center, a human fumbling at what appears to be a console made of jet black stone. "Caesar?" The man says with a laugh. "If that's what you want to be called." The man raises his hand over the big red button. It's now or never. What should I say? How do I say it? Should I say anything at all? Maybe I could try something I haven't seen? As the options present themselves, I can see the events unfold in my mind. Only one option leads to my survival… and it makes me sick.I don't know, just do something.
"Stop," I shout.Keep the element of surprise.The man turns around and stares at me with narrowed eyes. "You? Of all those they could send, they sent you?" "I don't understand," I reply. The man laughs and rubs his temples. "I'm sorry. You didn't have to follow me. You could have escaped." Wait... I've seen this before. Oh no. Before I can react, the man raises a pistol and fires. I feel myself being pushed back. I feel pain. I see the blood burst out, painting the walls, the floors, and even my visor. I stumble. The pain fades as my heart races. I look down and a massive chunk of my stomach is gone. All color fades, my vision blurs, and soon after I find myself in a serene, black void.
I aim the rifle and shoot.Use that bounty hunter voice, Amber.I raise the rifle and aim for the back of the man's head, but I can't fire. I want to, and I know I have to, but I can't. I don't want to be a killer. I take in a deep breath through my nose and it breaks the silence. The man spins around, reaching for the pistol at his side. I fire. This is new. I haven't seen this particular chain of events before. I don't like it. The round lands squarely in his chest. The force sends him backward. His body hits the terminal, pushing the button. The bunker rumbles all around me as I drop the rifle. I guess I'm more like mom than I thought… I hear a loud crack and feel a rush of pain. Blood bursts from my stomach and I'm thrown back further down the hall. The man spent his dying moments paying me back. Lucky. The man coughs and tries to stand, using the console for support. "Sometimes it takes more than one shot, little girl. Sorry." I feel cold. The color drains from the world around me. My vision blurs. I can't keep my eyes open. Funny… I can't feel the pain anymore. It's like falling asleep…
I aim my rifle. "Don't move."The man freezes, his hands tremble as he slowly turns away from the console. "I was wondering when you'd turn up." Wait. I've seen this before but he never said that. "Excuse me?" I reply. Ne nods, his eyes wide with wonder and fear. "I've seen you in my dreams. So many different scenarios, but I don't think I've seen this one." Does he have the dreams, the visions? That makes sense. What if he can see the possibilities just like me? I think he's making choices too. He's right. I haven't seen it either. Is that the secret? Do something different? "Step away," I command, "let's both leave alive. I think that would be best, don't you?" "No," the man replies. He spins around and slams his hand on the button. The bunker rumbles as I try to line up a shot. I've seen this... but it was from his perspective. My memory stirs, eden tech is the best. It takes only a moment, a single realization that guides my aim to the left side of the room. The man dodges to the side. Space warps around him. He moves like a blur, the motion propelling him nearly twenty feet from where he was and right into the sights of my rifle. My finger twitches against the trigger, a moment of hesitation that resists a fully committed squeeze. A twitch is enough. The rifle fires all the same. There's a white flash and a loud crack. The man is smiling when the round hits him in the chest. The expression fades to wide eyes and a slack jaw. The blood slowly pours from the wound, pooling at his feet as he stumbles backward. I can't move. I'm just as shocked as he is. "No," I shout. "I'm sorry." He's reaching for something, the pistol. I pull the trigger with tears flowing down my face. Sometimes it takes more than one shot. He falls backward, dead before even hitting the ground. I hold my breath as if waiting for him to stand back up. No. This isn't me. I'm not a killer. The truth begs to differ. I guess I'm more like mom than I thought I was. Caesar speaks, and his words filter through the translator with ease. "Thought Grave operational…"
So Cryonics is a little studied field, mainly due its controversial status in the scientific community. There were surprisingly few articles I could find on the subject, but while many consider it pseudoscience, others are making progress. I wish I could provide some interesting research beyond this, but sadly, its just not there, or it isn't quite possible.
https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0011224013000242
This is such a fascinating concept, and even chilling in some ways. I loved reading through this article of yours! It was amazing :)
Thanks so much, my friend!
Let's hope these things never wake up. What a terrifying concept. I love the way the Archivist narrates this article, especially the line - 'I love it when I'm wrong.' Gave me shivers for some reason. I second Jac - I've been redirected to the homepage when I click on your articles from the notification. I think if you change the article title/link after notifying it breaks it. XD
Thanks so much! I'm glad the narration works well. For sure, its terrifying to realize this could just wake up at some point. Oof. Also yeah. I added "the" to the title on this one XD. Pretty sure it broke
The way the wounded or almost dead can add a values to their community is marvelous. I could imagine that such AI-s would cause a great havoc, especially if they could connect. Is it known if there were connections between the Gravemind Generals to form a Gravemind War Council of sorts?
Sadly, or perhaps fortunately, not. The generals are too spread out to communicate. The species that developed them never gained faster-than-light communication, so any links between them could travel for decades, centuries in some cases, to reach their destination. That's one advantage. If one wakes up, at least itl be alone.
Also thanks so much! I really liked this idea.
Veeery interesting. It seems like every article I read gives me a new theory on the disappearance of earth. Every mysterious alien race makes me think "hmm... is this just unrecognizable far-future humans?" It's the same with these warriors in the thoughtgraves. I do find it unlikely, since you would probably recognize them if you yourself were a human, but you never know...
Oh wow! That's terrifying in the best way. I love the thought of AI becoming a sentient warfare machine, and the implications that has! It wiping out the species that created it might be a mirror onto our own world (although I hope not).
Truth. Definitely not an outcome we need lol thanks for the kind words, as always!
First, thanks for bringing this back into the stream, saves me having to go back and look it up! Ok, so it's operational... But which branch of the future actually happens?! Of course I read them all in order :) And don't think I've forgotten where you left us with Fraeia!
The last is the one that actually happens. You did it perfectly. I want to add more, and might do so when revised. I wanted it to feel like the character and the reader were both on a choose your own adventure kind of thing, dropping hints as Amber learns from each failure. I just didn't want it getting too repetitive, so I stuck with three. The one thing that never changes is the thought grave DEFINITELY wakes up. Oh yes. Dont worry. Fraeia will be back!
I can't like twice D: but I love this article. I had to read all the finals and all broke my lil heart, poor Amber D: Great work tho :D
I have got the living choice at first attempt, so I win anything? Then I read the other two and it was worth it... "We gets so near yet so faraway, we won't live to fight another day!"
Okay I've read the whole of Season 3 in one go. you got me hooked! but please tell me i doesn't end here :o I 'd really like to read more!
Oooo I'm flattered! Thanks so much for the love, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it thus far. There is more to come. I'm working on the next one now! Again thanks so much
Oooooohoho this is better than anything I could've expected! I can't believe this man was having dreams as well. Did Gibraltar give them to him? Whats the connection with humans? How are thought graves related to the human world and to Gibraltar, and why does Gibraltar want them 8or not want them) awake? So many questions aaaaaaah
I feel like my brain is breaking, looking at the time stamps for the comments and when this article was originally made?? I've liked it already?!?! What magic is this?!?!?!? Also I really loved the sort of choose your own adventure at the end! I, of course, opened and read all options. How could I not?? xD
this is actually one of the oldest articles. i planned to use the thought graves back when i first started the world but didn't know when or how id fit them in till plotting out this season. i revamped the old article to give it a place in the story. thanks so much. Im glad you liked that! i want to find a more aesthetically pleasing way of doing it, but for now, spoilers will have to do. XD
That makes so much sense! That's wonderful the way you've woven an older part in with updates to it, it actually IS magic! :D I'd be more than willing to help figure out some fun CSS aesthetics for that part, if you're ever feeling the urge to fiddle <3
OH YES! once we get caught up financially, i fully intend to raid the stormbril CSS store! also any pointers on the subject would be most helpful if you ever get the chance. This is a subject in which you truly are a master.
*excitement* and absolutely! I think a nice slick container with the 3 options at the top would be really handy, I'll play around and see if I can make something up that works nicely :D
That would be fantastic! Let me know if you come up with something, and thank you very much.
The ending with the possibilities that Amber saw. I naively thought there was a good way out of this, but it doesn't look like it. It's good to reread the article, I missed the Archivist x)
I can TASTE the warmind influence here haha— but this is a way cooler take on the concept than "uhhhh they're just really good AI, I guess?" I wonder if we'll ever hear more about the race that built them... Either way, the visions and potential paths opening up all at once are intriguing...just what is going on here? Poor Amber, though, as for what worked...
I LOVED the warminds! Called it perfectly here.
Warminds were cool! Shame they mostly got sidelined in the story after the darkness arrived.
AUGH! this choice is stressing me out. Haven't been able to get myself to pick one yet,
Technically its railroaded to show what Amber is expiriencing. There's only one "right" choice and technically its Amber choosing as opposed to the reader. You're just vicariously expiriencing it. Hope that eases the burden lol
Ooh. This has an interesting design as this is the first article without a sidebar that you've made in this world. I like it. I don't have much to say about the actual article other than it's awesome. I'd especially love to see what might happen if one of these machines were to wake up and what devastation that would reap upon humanity. However, I do have one major question that's only tangentially related to the article: what the heck are you doing that makes your article URLs mess up following your publications and notification of the article? The last two articles' notification links haven't worked--well, one did but upon refresh had broken--so I've had to manually locate them. Keep up the great work!
Hmmm.... well we did have some problems on WA last night but, I'm not sure. It may be slight changes to article name, which I believe automatically updates the url. Thanks for telling me that cause I didn't know!