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The Thought Graves

They sleep a death like slumber...

I stand before a mesa, black and grey stone walls that stretch for miles. I see massive metal doors, lined with gorgeous geometric shapes carved into the steel. The doors are open. Someone's already inside.   I've been standing here for at least five minutes. The visions, I understand them now. These are not meant to show me the future. They show me possibilities. I see them now, despite being awake.   I see where I succeed, but I see where I fail too. I fail over and over again. My stomach twists and turns as I remember the flash of pain; the moment of impact from antimatter rounds. I fail more often than not.   I don't want to do this alone. Why did they have to stay behind. I heard the rails echoing just moments ago. It's so quiet now. Is Fraeia still alive?   What should I do? I have to do something. I have to push through the fear. It's time. With a single trembling step, I enter the bunker.
     

From The Archives of Safeharbor



We aren't the only ones, you know. Many have touched these distant stars. The galactic community tends to avoid our section of the galaxy. They lack the star charts needed to navigate it. Its unknown terrors are more than enough to discourage them. Our Wayfarers are different. They see not the infinite void, but the flickers of light fretted within it.   We discovered something new. I’ve just been given a wealth of data gathered in an expedition to Holv-453. The planet was lifeless and barren, save for a single structure built atop a mesa near the southern pole of the planet.   We’ve stumbled on these structures before, but their nature eluded us for quite some time. These massive bunkers were built to protect the dead of some lost civilization. They may be empty, cold, and lonely, but the dead are not as silent as it would seem. Let us speak of the Thought Graves.
     

Thought Grave Bunkers

A Thought Grave is part military bunker, and part graveyard. The species that built them intended for them to stand indefinitely. Millions, perhaps hundreds of millions of years, have passed since this race died off. During my studies, it seemed impossible to truly understand their purpose. Why build something to keep troops alive and fill it with their lifeless bodies?   Each structure is unique in its layout and composition. They are always made from stone and metal, camouflaged in local rock formations. They can appear on any world. We’ve found them on wastelands as often as we’ve found them lingering on planets teeming with life. They can stand nearly a hundred meters tall and just as wide, but there is so much more hidden behind what you can see.   Within each Thought Grave are perfectly structured rooms, filled with strange metal coffins. Each room is built in complex geometric shapes. This is likely a religious practice, similar to how we built our cathedrals on earth. The rooms are connected by halls that weave deep beneath the planet's surface. Until now, that’s all we knew about them.
   

Anomaly

With this data lies an answer to the most pressing question. These installations are well armed and easily defended. They possess factories, armories, and living quarters. What’s strange to me is the presence of the coffins. I once believed that it could only mean one thing: perhaps their religion focuses on ancestry and warfare. They keep their soldiers close to aid them in battle.   I was wrong. I love it when I’m wrong. It's a delightful change of pace. We have never been able to open the coffins in the past, but this has changed. I’ve scoured the data. Two things stood out to me: First, each coffin features some kind of interface, implying connection to a power source. Second, each coffin is connected to an intricate network of pipes that seems solely placed for the coffins themselves.   My friend, If my theory is correct, then they were not trying to honor their dead, nor did they wish to keep the spirits of the fallen with them in battle. Within the plumbing of the complex, there exists traces of dimethyl sulfoxide, a common cryopreservative. They were refusing to let their warriors die.

Function

Thought Graves are never so well-preserved. Most of the time we stumble on little more than rubble. Even in this case, many of the coffins had little more than dust inside them. When wayfarers entered the complex, something activated within in. One of the coffins opened and the wayfarers were attacked by the creature that slumped within it.   No one was injured. It was unarmed, and It died very soon afterwards from a gunshot wound it sustained before being preserved. The process was never meant to be reversed. They were to be suspended indefinitely, the wounds they suffered, or their health being far too taxing to live for long after their revival. Remove any of these proud warriors from their coffin, and they will die, terrified and alone.   Then we must consider the connection between them. It’s obvious they would need a power source, but each coffin is linked by seemingly redundant connections. Again, I have a theory. This took so much in the way of resources, and for what? Why go through all this trouble? Why preserve them and not just let them die?

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Author's Notes

So Cryonics is a little studied field, mainly due its controversial status in the scientific community. There were surprisingly few articles I could find on the subject, but while many consider it pseudoscience, others are making progress. I wish I could provide some interesting research beyond this, but sadly, its just not there, or it isn't quite possible.

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0011224013000242


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Dec 12, 2020 17:59 by Jacob Billings

Ooh. This has an interesting design as this is the first article without a sidebar that you've made in this world. I like it. I don't have much to say about the actual article other than it's awesome. I'd especially love to see what might happen if one of these machines were to wake up and what devastation that would reap upon humanity. However, I do have one major question that's only tangentially related to the article: what the heck are you doing that makes your article URLs mess up following your publications and notification of the article? The last two articles' notification links haven't worked--well, one did but upon refresh had broken--so I've had to manually locate them. Keep up the great work!

Dec 12, 2020 18:19 by R. Dylon Elder

Hmmm.... well we did have some problems on WA last night but, I'm not sure. It may be slight changes to article name, which I believe automatically updates the url. Thanks for telling me that cause I didn't know!

Dec 13, 2020 15:53 by TC

This is such a fascinating concept, and even chilling in some ways. I loved reading through this article of yours! It was amazing :)

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Dec 13, 2020 17:03 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks so much, my friend!

Dec 13, 2020 16:45 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Let's hope these things never wake up. What a terrifying concept. I love the way the Archivist narrates this article, especially the line - 'I love it when I'm wrong.' Gave me shivers for some reason.   I second Jac - I've been redirected to the homepage when I click on your articles from the notification. I think if you change the article title/link after notifying it breaks it. XD

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Dec 13, 2020 17:05 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks so much! I'm glad the narration works well. For sure, its terrifying to realize this could just wake up at some point. Oof. Also yeah. I added "the" to the title on this one XD. Pretty sure it broke

Jan 1, 2021 13:16 by Angantyr

The way the wounded or almost dead can add a values to their community is marvelous. I could imagine that such AI-s would cause a great havoc, especially if they could connect. Is it known if there were connections between the Gravemind Generals to form a Gravemind War Council of sorts?

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Jan 1, 2021 20:48 by R. Dylon Elder

Sadly, or perhaps fortunately, not. The generals are too spread out to communicate. The species that developed them never gained faster-than-light communication, so any links between them could travel for decades, centuries in some cases, to reach their destination. That's one advantage. If one wakes up, at least itl be alone.

Jan 1, 2021 20:49 by R. Dylon Elder

Also thanks so much! I really liked this idea.

Jan 4, 2021 02:07

Veeery interesting. It seems like every article I read gives me a new theory on the disappearance of earth. Every mysterious alien race makes me think "hmm... is this just unrecognizable far-future humans?" It's the same with these warriors in the thoughtgraves. I do find it unlikely, since you would probably recognize them if you yourself were a human, but you never know...

Feb 28, 2021 00:17 by Time Bender

Oh wow! That's terrifying in the best way. I love the thought of AI becoming a sentient warfare machine, and the implications that has! It wiping out the species that created it might be a mirror onto our own world (although I hope not).

Mar 1, 2021 08:33 by R. Dylon Elder

Truth. Definitely not an outcome we need lol thanks for the kind words, as always!

Jan 8, 2022 13:58

First, thanks for bringing this back into the stream, saves me having to go back and look it up! Ok, so it's operational... But which branch of the future actually happens?! Of course I read them all in order :) And don't think I've forgotten where you left us with Fraeia!

Jan 8, 2022 16:26 by R. Dylon Elder

The last is the one that actually happens. You did it perfectly. I want to add more, and might do so when revised. I wanted it to feel like the character and the reader were both on a choose your own adventure kind of thing, dropping hints as Amber learns from each failure. I just didn't want it getting too repetitive, so I stuck with three. The one thing that never changes is the thought grave DEFINITELY wakes up.   Oh yes. Dont worry. Fraeia will be back!

Jan 8, 2022 16:29 by Catoblepon

I can't like twice D: but I love this article. I had to read all the finals and all broke my lil heart, poor Amber D: Great work tho :D

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Jan 8, 2022 23:17 by Luca Poddighe

I have got the living choice at first attempt, so I win anything? Then I read the other two and it was worth it... "We gets so near yet so faraway, we won't live to fight another day!"

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Jan 9, 2022 15:42 by Bart

Okay I've read the whole of Season 3 in one go. you got me hooked! but please tell me i doesn't end here :o I 'd really like to read more!

Jan 9, 2022 19:26 by R. Dylon Elder

Oooo I'm flattered! Thanks so much for the love, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it thus far. There is more to come. I'm working on the next one now! Again thanks so much

Jan 14, 2022 00:11 by TC

Oooooohoho this is better than anything I could've expected! I can't believe this man was having dreams as well. Did Gibraltar give them to him? Whats the connection with humans? How are thought graves related to the human world and to Gibraltar, and why does Gibraltar want them 8or not want them) awake? So many questions aaaaaaah

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Jan 24, 2022 06:59 by Stormbril

I feel like my brain is breaking, looking at the time stamps for the comments and when this article was originally made?? I've liked it already?!?! What magic is this?!?!?!?   Also I really loved the sort of choose your own adventure at the end! I, of course, opened and read all options. How could I not?? xD

Jan 24, 2022 07:40 by R. Dylon Elder

this is actually one of the oldest articles. i planned to use the thought graves back when i first started the world but didn't know when or how id fit them in till plotting out this season. i revamped the old article to give it a place in the story. thanks so much.   Im glad you liked that! i want to find a more aesthetically pleasing way of doing it, but for now, spoilers will have to do. XD

Jan 24, 2022 07:47 by Stormbril

That makes so much sense! That's wonderful the way you've woven an older part in with updates to it, it actually IS magic! :D   I'd be more than willing to help figure out some fun CSS aesthetics for that part, if you're ever feeling the urge to fiddle <3

Jan 24, 2022 07:50 by R. Dylon Elder

OH YES! once we get caught up financially, i fully intend to raid the stormbril CSS store! also any pointers on the subject would be most helpful if you ever get the chance. This is a subject in which you truly are a master.

Jan 24, 2022 10:21 by Stormbril

*excitement*   and absolutely! I think a nice slick container with the 3 options at the top would be really handy, I'll play around and see if I can make something up that works nicely :D

Jan 25, 2022 04:20 by R. Dylon Elder

That would be fantastic! Let me know if you come up with something, and thank you very much.

Feb 9, 2022 14:03

The ending with the possibilities that Amber saw. I naively thought there was a good way out of this, but it doesn't look like it. It's good to reread the article, I missed the Archivist x)

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Apr 27, 2022 08:02 by Grace Gittel Lewis

I can TASTE the warmind influence here haha— but this is a way cooler take on the concept than "uhhhh they're just really good AI, I guess?" I wonder if we'll ever hear more about the race that built them...   Either way, the visions and potential paths opening up all at once are intriguing...just what is going on here? Poor Amber, though, as for what worked...

Apr 28, 2022 03:33 by R. Dylon Elder

I LOVED the warminds! Called it perfectly here.

Apr 28, 2022 17:46 by Grace Gittel Lewis

Warminds were cool! Shame they mostly got sidelined in the story after the darkness arrived.

Jul 18, 2022 03:38

AUGH! this choice is stressing me out. Haven't been able to get myself to pick one yet,

Aug 29, 2022 14:25 by R. Dylon Elder

Technically its railroaded to show what Amber is expiriencing. There's only one "right" choice and technically its Amber choosing as opposed to the reader. You're just vicariously expiriencing it. Hope that eases the burden lol

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