The Thought Graves
They sleep a death like slumber...
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I stand before a mesa, black and grey stone walls that stretch for miles. I see massive metal doors, lined with gorgeous geometric shapes carved into the steel. The doors are open. Someone's already inside. I've been standing here for at least five minutes. The visions, I understand them now. These are not meant to show me the future. They show me possibilities. I see them now, despite being awake. I see where I succeed, but I see where I fail too. I fail over and over again. My stomach twists and turns as I remember the flash of pain; the moment of impact from antimatter rounds. I fail more often than not. I don't want to do this alone. Why did they have to stay behind. I heard the rails echoing just moments ago. It's so quiet now. Is Fraeia still alive? What should I do? I have to do something. I have to push through the fear. It's time. With a single trembling step, I enter the bunker.
So Cryonics is a little studied field, mainly due its controversial status in the scientific community. There were surprisingly few articles I could find on the subject, but while many consider it pseudoscience, others are making progress. I wish I could provide some interesting research beyond this, but sadly, its just not there, or it isn't quite possible.
https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0011224013000242
This is such a fascinating concept, and even chilling in some ways. I loved reading through this article of yours! It was amazing :)
Let's hope these things never wake up. What a terrifying concept. I love the way the Archivist narrates this article, especially the line - 'I love it when I'm wrong.' Gave me shivers for some reason. I second Jac - I've been redirected to the homepage when I click on your articles from the notification. I think if you change the article title/link after notifying it breaks it. XD
Thanks so much! I'm glad the narration works well. For sure, its terrifying to realize this could just wake up at some point. Oof. Also yeah. I added "the" to the title on this one XD. Pretty sure it broke
The way the wounded or almost dead can add a values to their community is marvelous. I could imagine that such AI-s would cause a great havoc, especially if they could connect. Is it known if there were connections between the Gravemind Generals to form a Gravemind War Council of sorts?
Sadly, or perhaps fortunately, not. The generals are too spread out to communicate. The species that developed them never gained faster-than-light communication, so any links between them could travel for decades, centuries in some cases, to reach their destination. That's one advantage. If one wakes up, at least itl be alone.
Veeery interesting. It seems like every article I read gives me a new theory on the disappearance of earth. Every mysterious alien race makes me think "hmm... is this just unrecognizable far-future humans?" It's the same with these warriors in the thoughtgraves. I do find it unlikely, since you would probably recognize them if you yourself were a human, but you never know...
Oh wow! That's terrifying in the best way. I love the thought of AI becoming a sentient warfare machine, and the implications that has! It wiping out the species that created it might be a mirror onto our own world (although I hope not).
Truth. Definitely not an outcome we need lol thanks for the kind words, as always!
First, thanks for bringing this back into the stream, saves me having to go back and look it up! Ok, so it's operational... But which branch of the future actually happens?! Of course I read them all in order :) And don't think I've forgotten where you left us with Fraeia!
The last is the one that actually happens. You did it perfectly. I want to add more, and might do so when revised. I wanted it to feel like the character and the reader were both on a choose your own adventure kind of thing, dropping hints as Amber learns from each failure. I just didn't want it getting too repetitive, so I stuck with three. The one thing that never changes is the thought grave DEFINITELY wakes up. Oh yes. Dont worry. Fraeia will be back!
I can't like twice D: but I love this article. I had to read all the finals and all broke my lil heart, poor Amber D: Great work tho :D
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I have got the living choice at first attempt, so I win anything? Then I read the other two and it was worth it... "We gets so near yet so faraway, we won't live to fight another day!"
Okay I've read the whole of Season 3 in one go. you got me hooked! but please tell me i doesn't end here :o I 'd really like to read more!
Oooo I'm flattered! Thanks so much for the love, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it thus far. There is more to come. I'm working on the next one now! Again thanks so much
Oooooohoho this is better than anything I could've expected! I can't believe this man was having dreams as well. Did Gibraltar give them to him? Whats the connection with humans? How are thought graves related to the human world and to Gibraltar, and why does Gibraltar want them 8or not want them) awake? So many questions aaaaaaah
I feel like my brain is breaking, looking at the time stamps for the comments and when this article was originally made?? I've liked it already?!?! What magic is this?!?!?!? Also I really loved the sort of choose your own adventure at the end! I, of course, opened and read all options. How could I not?? xD
this is actually one of the oldest articles. i planned to use the thought graves back when i first started the world but didn't know when or how id fit them in till plotting out this season. i revamped the old article to give it a place in the story. thanks so much. Im glad you liked that! i want to find a more aesthetically pleasing way of doing it, but for now, spoilers will have to do. XD
That makes so much sense! That's wonderful the way you've woven an older part in with updates to it, it actually IS magic! :D I'd be more than willing to help figure out some fun CSS aesthetics for that part, if you're ever feeling the urge to fiddle <3
OH YES! once we get caught up financially, i fully intend to raid the stormbril CSS store! also any pointers on the subject would be most helpful if you ever get the chance. This is a subject in which you truly are a master.
*excitement* and absolutely! I think a nice slick container with the 3 options at the top would be really handy, I'll play around and see if I can make something up that works nicely :D
That would be fantastic! Let me know if you come up with something, and thank you very much.
The ending with the possibilities that Amber saw. I naively thought there was a good way out of this, but it doesn't look like it. It's good to reread the article, I missed the Archivist x)
I can TASTE the warmind influence here haha— but this is a way cooler take on the concept than "uhhhh they're just really good AI, I guess?" I wonder if we'll ever hear more about the race that built them... Either way, the visions and potential paths opening up all at once are intriguing...just what is going on here? Poor Amber, though, as for what worked...
Warminds were cool! Shame they mostly got sidelined in the story after the darkness arrived.
AUGH! this choice is stressing me out. Haven't been able to get myself to pick one yet,
Technically its railroaded to show what Amber is expiriencing. There's only one "right" choice and technically its Amber choosing as opposed to the reader. You're just vicariously expiriencing it. Hope that eases the burden lol
Ooh. This has an interesting design as this is the first article without a sidebar that you've made in this world. I like it. I don't have much to say about the actual article other than it's awesome. I'd especially love to see what might happen if one of these machines were to wake up and what devastation that would reap upon humanity. However, I do have one major question that's only tangentially related to the article: what the heck are you doing that makes your article URLs mess up following your publications and notification of the article? The last two articles' notification links haven't worked--well, one did but upon refresh had broken--so I've had to manually locate them. Keep up the great work!
Hmmm.... well we did have some problems on WA last night but, I'm not sure. It may be slight changes to article name, which I believe automatically updates the url. Thanks for telling me that cause I didn't know!