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The Sin Eaters

Those Who Broke Into Hell...

Mute and Caydie stepped into The Archive. Mute spent so much time there since his arrival, but he still felt like a stranger. It wasnt just the archive. He felt like a stranger to the whole planet.   He missed the vibrations of the station's various machinery and the smell of sterile air. He even missed the days of silence. Talking to so many in such a small period of time was exhausting.   The Archivist greeted them, and Mute noticed how his body moved, stiff and without grace, like a machine should move. Mute narrowed his eyes.   Caydie looked at The Archivist from head to toe and raised an eyebrow. "You called for us?"   "Indeed I did." The archivist replied, staring at an empty steel table in front of him.   "Is something wrong?"   "Yes," he began, pausing to look up before continuing, "close the doors, if you would."   Mute walked to the nearest set of double steel doors. "What's this about?"   The Archivist gave a light chuckle, watching as they obeyed. "My friends, do you believe in ghosts?"   "No," Caydie said, laughing. "What kind of question is that?"   The archivist ignored her and turned to Mute. "And you?"   "'fraid not," Mute answered, closing the final door. He stepped forward and waited for the archivist to explain.   The archivist's head snapped to the left, his attention drawn to something on the far side of the room. He spoke in a whisper, his eyes fixed on what appeared to be empty space, "Neither do I."
   
Ghosts have no place in our rational reality. You wanted to know more about what happened on the station, yes? I've studied the feeds. I've gathered every piece of information in the archive, and even petitioned the Eden to give me access to theirs. Still, these creatures are an enigma. I do not know what they are.   They haunt the void in black ships, with black flags and black sails. They are a story told in faintly lit space stations to keep travelers away from lesser known stars. I don't know what they call themselves. They may not even have a name. Data from Invicta referred to them as "Sin Eaters." It never mentioned why.     They feed on death. They worship it, even. They thrive on fear, and are capable of technological feats that push the boundaries of not only our science, but that of most other species. They collect biomass from everywhere they go, their ships silently drifting through space. We don't know what they do with it, only that they actively refuse to destroy ships in fear of losing what they can gather on board.
 

Ghost stories

The sin eaters are a recent anomaly. The Origin Exiles encountered them first. They met in a time before their strange transformations. The Eden would encounter them next, and the encounter did not end well. Several ships were found empty, barren of life. Imagine your own gods being abandoned in the void, falling before a single enemy vessel.   From there we hear tales of strange invisible lifeforms roaming the galaxy and abducting those who wander too far from home. They infiltrate planets, unseen and unheard. They take to robbing graves and collecting bodies on distant battlefields. Cloaking technology shouldn't be possible to that degree.   Their presence often leads to madness. The few who survive their encounters report hallucinations, strange whispers, and a lasting fear of the dark. What are they? How do these creatures tick? If these things exist, then we may have a serious problem on our hands.

Black Sails, Black Flags

Their ships lack cloaking technology, or perhaps they don't bother to use it. They don't need to. Eden reports claim their ships lack any form of weaponry. Their technology seems to focus on defense, their shielding and armor far superior to anything we know of.   Any attempt at communication often ends in silence. This is preferable. Occasionally, trying to communicate can lead to a response consisting of endless overlapping whispers. It is as if thousands tried to speak at once. Ships tend to fall into chaos soon after.   Their ships lack transponders, the means all those in the galaxy used to identify vessels. Most ships will broadcast their designation, and name, so they can be identified in the vast expanse of space. This fact indicates they have little intention of communicating with anyone, including each other. That, or they have some unknown means of doing so.
 
 

Scavengers

One thing that seems to always be true across the many reports of this strange species is how they don't like to fight. They have no weapons at all, not even for soldiers.   They pick off the weak and broken. They hunt in packs but never attack a well-armed opponent unless provoked. The Eden managed to destroy a vessel. Since then, they flee in terror when shown strength greater than their own.   Despite this, they have taken an interest in humanity. We are indeed weak, and we are broken beyond repair. Perhaps they seek to harvest us en masse one day. Perhaps they wish to study us for an invasion. We must learn more.

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Author's Notes

  adaptive color change   Parts of the brain.


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Jul 8, 2021 17:29 by C. B. Ash

As always, I *adore* this. I'm loving the lead up here about the Sin Eaters. I'm sensing more to come, am I right? I hope I'm right! :D

Jul 8, 2021 17:59 by R. Dylon Elder

Oh yessss. More to come for sure! Thank you as always. I'm glad you enjoyed it

Jul 8, 2021 18:19

You really managed to nail that unsettling, ghost story vibe with this one; really well written, just enough information to get the idea across while still leaving a lot to the imagination in a way that captures their reputation in-universe. This was a really fun read, well done!

Jul 8, 2021 23:40 by R. Dylon Elder

I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend! Thanks for the high praise!

Jul 8, 2021 19:44

Awesome! You have revealed the true nature of Stygian blue :-D Seriously, this is great and I'm hooked all over again.

Jul 8, 2021 23:41 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks so much. I cant tell you how much I appreciate it.

Jul 9, 2021 03:51 by Dani

Might be my favorite one of yours yet! Sooooo intriguing and spooky! I wouldn't want to meet one of those in the light of day, much less a dark alley... though how would I know...aaaahhh! The creepiness factor is a 20 on a scale that only goes to 10! :D


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Jul 15, 2021 06:36 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks so much!!! Sorry it took so long to reply.

Jul 11, 2021 07:02

a vehicle... for what? or is it more like a bio-drone?   Sin-eaters would certainly be a challenge to run in a campaign; you'd have to delve into each character's backstory and find the thing they feel most guilty about. I'm wondering about the bit where he says the layout isn't right though... is it his own memories of guilt being superimposed over another location?   Also now I can start thinking about what invicta feels guilty about that has to do with her vision of the pearly gates. Was she among those who broke into heaven in the fist place?   It occurs to me that this whole thing may just be a retelling of the story of the Tower of Babel, except the mortals somehow succeed and break the universe.

Jul 11, 2021 07:38 by R. Dylon Elder

A vehicle for the brain, a human brain. I was actually wondering if that was clear enough.   On hallucinations, if you've ever had a dream you became aware of during the dream itself, you know what their experiencing. There's a moment when something doesnt add up and you're like wait this isnt right.   In mutes case, the station wasnt created completely from memory. A kiosk may be out of place or a docking bay. He wasnt even on the station when the siliue came. That was his first clue.   I'll try to make this more clear for sure. The memories are usually half formed, as the spores focus more on the center of the brain behind emotion as opposed to memory.   Also yes. Invicta was personally involved in the breaking in of heaven. Many of the earthborn exiles were.   I can confirm that that's not what's happening, at least not intentionally, but that is an interesting idea. Hmmm I got to brush up on that story...

Jul 13, 2021 15:28 by Avalon Arcana

It's a WHAT!? Oh my gosh could you get more captivating? This is amazing. Truly :D

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Jul 13, 2021 23:20 by Time Bender

Woah, this is amazing! I love this so much. Things keep changing every line, and I'm loving it so much! Each line delivers brand new information. It's awesome how you write; I hope you can keep up writing! :D

Jul 15, 2021 06:08 by Wendy Vlemings (Rynn19)

Can I just say that the Archivist can be very scary? He's one of my favorite characters, but the way he killed that Sin Eater was more than a little unsettling. Not that the thing didn't deserve to die. I can't wait to learn more about these things, but at the same time I want to know what the wayfarers are going to find.

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Aug 12, 2021 17:46 by R. Dylon Elder

Oooo yes. Hes terrifying. I always wanted to write the archivist like a little something was missing, and his complete disregard for life that isnt human is a part of that.

Aug 3, 2021 10:30 by Kaleidechse

I love how every answer given here raises more questions. These Sin Eaters are wonderfully spooky and mysterious. And thank you for the details on the impossible colors - I learned something new today, and it's a fascinating topic! Also, I'm a little scared of the archivist now. Hard to tell what has me more worried - the Sin Eaters driving ships full of people mad and harvesting corpses for whatever purpose, or the way the archivist gleefully murders one of them in order to study the corpse.


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Aug 12, 2021 17:48 by R. Dylon Elder

I'm glad you enjoy it and again, sorry for the delay! Thanks so much!

Aug 5, 2021 11:13 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Human brain? D:   This was very creepy. Amazing job.

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Aug 12, 2021 09:14 by TC

Oh man oh man oh man!! This is so cool aaah!! (quick note it seems the link in the authors notes are not complete) I'm just aaaaaah this is great, I want to know so much more! Clearly these Sin Eaters used to be humans of some kind, god I wonder what happened to them and all. This is great. I wish I were a really rich person who could adapt this into a show.

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Aug 12, 2021 17:50 by R. Dylon Elder

Ahh! Thank you for that. I'll fix it. I would love for this world to get that big. I have plans for it, but only time will tell. I definitely want to compile the story in a book, maybe with some original artwork. We shall see. Thanks so much!

Aug 18, 2021 00:19 by Grace Gittel Lewis

You've been teasing them for quite some time now— and BOY DID YOU DELIVER. Terrifying! I love how you didn't make them out to be any old murderous species— but ones that don't even use weaponry!   And if the end here implies what I think it does, things are somehow about to get EVEN MORE INTERESTING???

Aug 18, 2021 03:47 by R. Dylon Elder

I'm gonna answer all of your awesome comments here. Thanks for all the love too. I'm glad you're enjoying it and holy crap you've been bringing it like crazy! Thanks so much!   I'm glad I delivered here. They're a big deal and wanted them to still be scary but couldnt make them too powerful. Also yessss this season is wild lol ot indeed gets more interesting.

Aug 18, 2021 15:24 by Grace Gittel Lewis

I hope I'll have more time in the coming days to catch up! I've got a lot to read after Summer Camp!

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