Battlefield Prosthetics

A Study On Eden Culture, By Francis Argus Bors

Warning: This might be a little gruesome for some.

Mouse entered the infirmity with Argus and Diavae following close behind. Harsh white lights flickered on when they reached the operation room. She took a deep breath as Diavae opened the black case.   Inside was a prosthetic arm, sleek and black with all manner of materials used in its composition. A circular device nestled in foam lining sat beside it, an attachment for the prosthetic.   Mouse spoke, her breath shaking at the sight, "I love it. Thank you." She smiled, tears forming in her eyes. "I'm ready. How do we do this?" She looked at Diavae who didn't share her excitement. Even argus stood silent and solemn with her arms crossed on the opposite end of the room. "What?"   Diavae nodded and gestured to the operation table. Mouse sat and listened as they spoke, "Don't agree until you know exactly what it is needed from you. This will be a traumatic experience. It will be exceedingly painful. Are you sure?"   Mouse nodded, struggling to speak but managing to answer with a single word, "yes."   "Lie back," Diavae said. They took the ring and set it aside, then applied a cleaning solution to the stump where Mouse's arm used to be. Diavae took a scalpel, revealed it to Mouse, and said, "I'll need to reopen the wound, sever blood vessels and cut off the excess skin. It may be better if Francis holds you down." They turned to Argus. "Can you manage that?"   Mouse stared at the blade, horrified, Argus nodded and stepped forward, preparing herself. She took Mouse's hand and placed her other hand on Mouse's shoulder, holding her down. "I got her."
 
The eden are fierce in combat, unfeeling and tireless. Their military is the most feared and respected in the galaxy, and there are many reasons why. Their skill is unmatched, their technology is more advanced than most species could ever hope to be. More than this, their resilience makes their ground troops an unstoppable force, but everything can die if enough damage is sustained.   A body is just a body. Flesh tears and bones break. War becomes more hellish with every innovation and the loss of life and limb becomes an even greater risk. The eden sought to mitigate this risk, and developed self cleaning, highly advanced prosthetics designed to be attached in a war zone.   This technology allows them to send troops back into the fight almost as fast as they can be removed. Enemies fall before a renewable military force, one that is as unyielding as it is overwhelming.


Battlefield Prosthetics

Battlefield prosthetics are exactly what you'd expect. They are prosthetic limbs that can be attached on the battlefield. Eden infirmaries are always strangely vacant. Their skill in medicine able to turn it into a mere pit stop for the wounded.   These prosthetics allow eden soldiers the luxury of a limb when lost. It is attached and the eden is sent back to the front lines, as if they never lost the limb in the first place.   It's a painful operation. The subject cannot be under any form of anesthesia. They must be awake for the entire operation. They must feel every moment of pain or the operation may not work properly.
   

The Operation

The limb isn't the hard part, it's the adapter. The ring is grafted to the skin, welding each nerve to their proper port. The blood vessels are fixed to tubes in the ring to provide proper blood flow and eliminate contact with metal surfaces in the arm. The muscles are realigned, burned to the ring to make movement feel more natural.   Anesthetics can block receptors in the nervous system, inhibit the brain's ability to trigger the nerves as needed. The patient must be awake, actively engaging a limb that is no longer there. The ring will pick up on these subtle electrical impulses and arrange the nerves accordingly.   Recovery is almost immediate, though it will take time to heal the burns. Once the ring is operational, any compatible limb can be attached, though it's best to use one fitted to the patient. This is achieved by shaping the prosthetic, a process that is automatically achieved with nanites in mock blood vessels within the prosthetic. The prosthetic will be a perfect fit in minutes.

Biology

These prosthetics were designed to be exclusively used by the eden, but it's always been theoretically possible for other species to use them. Each eden genetically alters their appearance to suit whatever species they interact with most. This means there are many different prosthetics to suit different species.   These prosthetics are all comparable provided they fit the adapter on the patient, and it's theoretically possible for limbs not normally found in a species to be used by a patient of that species. It's unknown how true this is. While the biology is the same, few species can handle the trauma of the operation. For that reason, it's rarely attempted.   The successful operation on Rhey "Mouse" Thakur is a huge step in eden-human relations. It's likely that's the main reason why Diavae was so personally invested beyond it being in her nature to help. It's possible that Mouse may be unknowingly part of a grander design to test the limits of this technology. Only time will tell.

Rejection and acceptance

Rejection is very rare, but it can happen, particularly with younger patients that are still developing. It's easy to trick the mind, and the body usually follows.   Even if accepted, there are numerous actions needed to ensure the longevity of the prosthetic. Lubrication is essential for fluid and natural movement. Any lubricant will do, but the eden produce a highly efficient oil applied the moment the movement of the prosthetic seems to bind.   The patient also needs to attend routine appointments, about once a year though that varies depending on just where one is. A time is set up on the adapter that will notify the patient when to get the operation site looked at again. This is to ensure the continued growth of skin and tissue does not interfere with the adapter, leading to rejection.
 

Benefits

There are several benefits to these prosthetics. Eden prosthetics are composed of a strong steel frame, which usually makes it stronger than the limb it replaces. You can run faster, hit harder, and tire less when doing so. These benefits have limits, however.   An example would be how a replaced arm won't be able to lift a massive amount of weight. You use more than your arm to lift, for starters, and even if you succeed, you're likely to tear the prosthetic from the body. Another would be how one will still be severely injured if falling from great heights with prosthetic legs.   Nanites help shape the arm to fit the user. They can also help repair and maintain the prosthetic. The nanites act as a shield as well, capable of blocking most projectiles and diffusing the kinetic force of being hit by said projectiles.

Side effects

Side effects include pain around the operation site. Movement is rarely hindered but one can be sluggish for a time after the operation whole they adjust to the limb and the limb does the same to them.   This can also occur if the prosthetic is damaged, poorly lubricated or if problems occur during the operation. The latter can lead to nerve damage, or situations where the nerves "cross." Imagine trying to turn your wrist, but instead you only move a finger, or in particularly bad cases, throw a wild haymaker.   While usually reserved for high ranking officials and war saints, there are some prosthetics that have other functions built in, such as combat stims that induce mania, and personna modules, AI that help the user in various tasks of war.
   
Diavae worked with haste, cutting a cross and removing partitions of skin. She carved like an artist, unshaken by Mouse's frantic screams, "No. Stop. I- I can't."   "Too late now," Diavae said, picking up the adapter. She placed it against the wound, and small white flashes of light popped and sparked. Mouse jolted, trying to escape, but Diavae placed their hand on Mouse's chest.   It burned, a searing pain that Mouse never experienced before. Adrenaline surges, but no matter how much she tried, she couldn't muster the strength to resist. Diave let go of the adapter, which continued to spark. They grabbed the prosthetic and attached it to the ring, turning the assembly to lock it in place. "Move your arm."   Mouse ignored her, screaming and kicking her feet against the table.   "Try to move your arm," they commanded.   A finger flexed on the prosthetic, a subtle movement that felt all too real.   Mouse stopped for only a moment, her eyes glued to the sight in awe as the fingers danced to her every command. The pain seemed to fade away when she managed to turn the wrist. It was just like she remembered.   The smell of burning flesh sat in the air, but Mouse barely noticed. The arm lifted from the table, then back down. She bent it back, then stretched it out. She could feel it. It wasn't just a hunk of circuitry. It felt like it was truly her arm. Diavae grabbed the hand and gave it a gentle squeeze.   New tears formed and quickly fell. Mouse felt it as if it were her own skin, but that wasn't what made her tear up.   The feeling was pleasant. Argus clutched to her other hand and it felt like agony, mouse's skin grating against hers. Diavae's skin was soft, delicate. She didn't know skin could feel like that.   Diavae stepped back and Argus let go. Mouse reached for her and Argus grabbed the prosthetic hand. It felt just as soft. Mouse smiled. Was this what it felt like before?   "What is it?" Argus asked.   "Sorry." Mouse said, suddenly aware that it wasn't a mutual experience. "Thank you."   Argus smirked. "Don't thank me, I'm just the messenger."   Mouse turned to Diavae. They held out a hand and nodded. "No thanks needed. Hold still, I need to address the burns."


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Aug 10, 2021 21:15 by Time Bender

Aw, I keep forgetting how these humans can't stand to touch one another! They're all touch-starved. Poor people! :(

Aug 10, 2021 21:20 by R. Dylon Elder

Yes indeed. It's one of the saddest parts of the setting and yet something I dont show as much as I probably should. Definitely gonna fix that. Thank you!

Aug 10, 2021 22:55

I love the story, the setting, the cybernetic topics, the world them, the mood and the font. So there is nothing I don't like about it!


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Aug 11, 2021 17:17 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks so much!

Aug 11, 2021 00:01

Wow, amazing. So traumatic but so useful. I can imagine all the uses for these prosthetics.

Aug 11, 2021 17:18 by R. Dylon Elder

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much.

Aug 12, 2021 01:49 by Avalon Arcana

I'm sitting here torn between the beauty of true touch and the horrors it took to get there.

Beautiful.

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Aug 12, 2021 02:40 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks for saying so. I was really feeling iffy if it hit home or not and actually felt right. Prolly needs some editing but I hope it was evocative enough on both counts. Thanks so much!

Aug 15, 2021 00:17 by Stormbril

What an astonishingly horrifying ordeal people have to go through to have these prosthetics put onto them. Awake, no anesthesia? Dang!   And as always, utterly compelling prose :) Mouse is such a great character to follow along with.

Aug 20, 2021 06:34 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks so much storm!

Aug 16, 2021 01:11

"but the eden produce a highly efficient oil applied the moment the movement of the prosthetic seems to bind." It's a bit unclear; is this an automatic process or something you need to do manually?   I was not expecting the bit about mouse being able to touch things with her hand now. that's a really cool aspect of the setting that cropped up in a really unexpected way.

Aug 20, 2021 06:35 by R. Dylon Elder

I'll expand on that, cause yeah it is a little vague. It needs to be manually applied through small holes.   I'm glad it was well recieved. I was worried about her reaction to touch being a bit much.

Aug 20, 2021 06:01 by Wendy Vlemings (Rynn19)

Aww, Mouse got her prosthetic arm, and that arm doesn't have the same problem with touch as her own arm had. I never considered that. It opens up a new world for her.

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Aug 20, 2021 06:36 by R. Dylon Elder

Indeed! Its definitely something I want to explore more. May add some scenes where I do just that. Thanks so much! I'm glad it was enjoyed.

Aug 24, 2021 19:10 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Poor humans, struggling to touch one another. I do wonder how they manage to have babies sometimes. D:   This is a really fascinating article. Yay for Mouse. But also, yikes.

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Sep 17, 2021 06:27 by R. Dylon Elder

Holy crap I cant believe I forgot this. So sorry and sorry for adding to those notifs with it. I've been asked this a few times and had to go find the reply to your question.     "It's much more difficult for earthborn, who have developed haphephobia in response to touch. Usually artificial means of reproduction are used there. Later generations are better adapted to the modifications and find their own ways. Much like how Oracle does here, they can power through it. Another way is by overwhelming the senses. Stargazing is romantic, but it's also a good time to be intimate. Once in process, the act is overwhelming enough. The human brain does alllll kinds of weird things throughout an intimate expirience. Pain is dulled, fatigue can fade, and that's just the tip of the iceberg. It's how our species survives so we developed ways of putting certain issues on the backburner to prioritize. This basically overrides the tactile issues, or at least deadens them. Sometimes that doesnt work, every human is different. Some are less affected and some days are better than others. If both parties are on a good day, then it's easier." Again, so sorry. Lol hope it clears that up and tried to keep it tasteful for a public forum XD

Sep 17, 2021 20:25 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Yes, thank you! <3

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Nov 5, 2021 21:24 by Grace Gittel Lewis

God it sounds like an ordeal to install! As someone who's disabled themselves (funnily enough, with my arms and hands) I was worried you were going go the route of simply hand waving Mouse' injury with consequence-free prosthetics but it sounds like there are still negatives she'll have to deal with— glad you didn't just undo that. Always cool to see more disabled characters!

Nov 5, 2021 21:57 by R. Dylon Elder

Oh yes, gotta be some drawbacks to that kind of thing. I plan on exploring it more in the future, both disability and mental health. Lots of trauma in this season. I'm glad it didnt offend for sure.

Jan 30, 2022 04:32 by Morgan Biscup

I am so glad Mouse is starting to get some good back. The bit about touch almost made *me* cry.

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